I think that even if you don't want to continue this story you should at least add an epilogue. Because I'm sure everyone wants to know how the law turns out and how happy Hermione and Bill are. Maybe in about five years or so? Even if you don't do an epilogue you should get rid of the question mark about rather you are finished or not. Where the last chapter ended is a very good ending, but the fact that the story is listed as incomplete bothers me.
Review By [NicoleD] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
I loved it! That was a well-developed plot line and a captivating story that I read from start to finish. It would be nice to see Hermoine and Bill get to know each other as their marriage progressed, but this was a nice place to end it off as well. Great work!
Review By [Mystique] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love it as is. If you did decide to finish this I think you would be a little hard pressed to finish it better than it is right now. Although what would happen next would be very intresting to read. Again I love this.
Review By [spring] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6 - The Wedding" from IsabelleBlack
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This story is just... wonderful! I loooooooooooove it! Is this the end? please tell me there is other chapters! I DEMAND other chapters! I want to read about their married life, and... I don't know. babies! or something... maybe just... keep reading..? so - cof cof - keep writing. Seriously, this fic is great.
Review By [IsabelleBlack] • Date [20 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6 - The Wedding" from Clannadlvr
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Awww! This story is just like a nice warm hug.
Review By [Clannadlvr] • Date [5 Jan 06] • Not Rated
I'm so excited to see you wrote more on this story! I'm going to take that "The End?" as a question and say, "No!" ;-) I'd certainly love to see more! Their relationship has only started - what happens next? Where will they live, what will Hermione do for her career? What was Snape's reaction to Hermione not chosing him? Oh, and why did they wind up getting married before graduation?
Thorougly loved this, woman! Hope to see more of your stuff in this fandom soon!
Review By [Gioia] • Date [4 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6 - The Wedding" from Betrothed
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hey- amazing story.... PLEASE DO NOT END IT there!!! go on come on... the chemistry between them is awesome.... u have to go on.... :D please.... pretty please.... pretty please with sugar on top? love, betrothed P.S. I've been waiting for the update for the last 3-4 months... glad u finally put it up... :D *hugs*
Review By [Betrothed] • Date [30 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6 - The Wedding" from castofftheday
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I adored the original Contractual Obligations, but I think I love this one even more. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [castofftheday] • Date [23 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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