I hope you get inspired to add more chapters to this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some Chocolate Pie::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# You know you've read a good book when you turn the last page and feel as if you've lost a friend. - Anonymous #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of story "Telling" from Anonymous Reviewer
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ok read it again and still like it *g*
wic
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [20 May 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Telling" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh I So want more:D
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Feb 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Telling" from Anonymous Reviewer
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NO! That can't be the end!! More? Please?
Jinni
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Feb 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Telling" from Anonymous Reviewer
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A bit sudden ending. You need to flesh that out more as it leaves many questions open - the most important one being: Why?. The story is good but in desperate need of either more chapters or an epilogue - I'd vote for more chapters.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Feb 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Telling" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Please don't end it there!!! That's just cruel. I have to know what happens next. PLEASE!!!!!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Feb 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Telling" from Anonymous Reviewer
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You can't stop there. You have to continue. I really like this story.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Feb 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment