Very nice, very nice indeed.

I love that last chapter with Spike. Two to the Heart and One to the groin. Hilarious. Keep up the good work.

Ehhh - long time passed on this one - but Asimov wasn't properly a physicist. His doctorate and primary advocation as a scientist was biochemistry.

Hey just finished the story and have to say I loved it, although I did find the lack of Tony Stark odd, considering his intellect. Also Steven Strange would go well seeing as he was both a world-class surgeon and then Sorcerer Supreme.

Well it's off to the sequel, keep up the good work.

Hi!

I just wanted to tell you real quick how much i loved this fic... Um... I loved it... A lot. I even reccomended it.

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna read the sequel now.

Bye! :)

Excellent fic, but in ch. 30, it's Matthew Quigley.

Other than that, this is an excellent idea, and you make it fun.

Hey, this needs to be marked as 'completed' or it won't be eligible for a large number of COA awards.

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Cool, thanks.

The mixing of present and past tense got pretty bad this chapter. Present tense is just generally awful to read, but when you're not even consistently writing in it? Pretty painful.

BRAVO BRAVO !!!
thank you that was awesome. Can't wait to read more.

Hmm, if Xander was interested in going back to the spaghetti western, I'd love to see him dressed as Amos Malone from the 'Mad Amos' short story collection by Alan Dean Foster. The guy has gone toe to toe with a dragon - the smart way - and his horse is... impressive :D

Aww, you can have Xander go basically anywhere, how about torturing Spike, instead of just killing him? Sneak into the warehouse, knock the blond vampire out and dress him as a goody-goody like Superman... or a Care Bear.... Just before the spell hits :D ... Wait, I just read Chapter #30, seems like he wouldn't have much time after the spell ended to think. Oh well.

Definitely Reccing this one. Huh, I wonder why I never saw it before now.

They may be turning into Super-Xander and Super-Dawn, but the price they're paying is appropriate :)

I'd like to see Dawn as Deanna Troi. I've set up Buffy as Troi in one of my fics, but I haven't really followed up on it.

You had them run into Lorne with friends in tow! Awesome :)

I like this one!! Xander/Dawn/Willow are a perfect threesome!

I like the idea of Xander relieving the Halloween incident over and over again gaining more and more skills plus I like it that Doyle and Dawn towards the end of the first part join in the fun too I can't wait to read the rest good job

Love the SG1 stuff in both this part and the previous part.

It is totally understandable that being Kronos would majorly screw with your mind. Thankfully, he became Adam. And know it looks like Dawn is along for the ride! Yippee!!!

Wow, Xander as Kronos, icky. Well done, but icky.

Loved the interaction between the three characters. Wonderfully done.