I hope that you will pick this one back up too. You have a very good start and an interesting middle, but it needs the finish... Like what is Amy going to do to try and get the book, and how are they going to stop her? Are they going to call in Willow along with the rest of the Sunnydale gang to fight her and possibly the Sanderson Sisters IF Amy manages to get the book?I know let Amy try to seduce Carlos and manage to steal the key and then she manages to get the book and the sisters come back and then Willow has to fight them... LOL Too many ideas you really have to put me out of my misery and finish this please.
Comments from author:
This, like so many of my older fics, was put on hiatus due to the big PC crash of '07. And unfortunately, I have nothing saved for it...There was a plan, and my brain remembers some of it, so there is a definate goal to get back to it (it was supposed to be a short ten-parter, if I remember correctly, which would make it half-way done.) Dani and Carlos as a duo was so strong in my head, that they're mentioned as being together (which was always the goal) in a lot of my other drabbles and ficlets (To Have and To Hold mentions them, I believe - just to name one.). The only problem is because it's been so long with some of them, I have to go back and re-read the entire story just to get into the mind space of it. And some like SL (which I love writing but is majorily epic in cast, proportions and general complications) that it takes days before I can slog through it.
I'll see what I can whip up with this one though. :)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [6 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow, I certainly wasn't expecting that Sunnydale visitor! You're doing a great job following the Hocus Pocus 'verse, and I look forward to further updates. Keep up the good work.
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [3 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Excellent story. I loved Hocus Pocus when it first came out and your meshing of the two universes is really good. I look forward to reading more but don't feel hurried on updates. I like to reread stories that haven't been updated in awhile.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I think your the first person who didn't say to rush, rush, rush. I've been getting a lot of reviews (mainly from ff.net, including a really sarcastic one) that have been all 'oooh, new chappie NOW!!' Glad you like the story, and there's another Hocus Pocus cross mini in my story Winter Tidings. ~J