Review of chapter "Introductions" from Cutiepie
I don't know if it is because of the writing program that you imported the chapter from or what, but there are funny symbols in place of the quotation marks. Would you mind please editing the story so that they are no longer there? Thanks.
Now, for the story itself. Fun and unique, I would like to see more of it and where you are going with it. Poor Percy is either a real big selfish jerk, or (as is the case in this story) horribly misunderstood. I'm glad that he'll now have Dawn for comfort, on whichever level you chose to have them co-exist. =]
Comments from author:
I just copied and pasted from Word. I've had the same problem lately with seeing those. It's a simple fix. All you need to do is go to View in your browser and change the Character Encoding. That should get rid of the funny symbols.
I'm a firm believer in the case that Percy is misunderstood. I believe Rowling has been dropping some big hints that he's not what he seems. I really don't think we're getting the full story on him since the books are written from Harry's view after all.
If I can manage to find some inspiration, I'd eventually have a Dawn/Percy pairing. The problem is that the muse ended there last night. I'd love to continue this, though.
Thanks so much for your feedback!
Review By [Cutiepie
] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Not Rated