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Review of chapter "Persuaded By Evil" from MBB
Review:
Your writing is good to follow (to me). There is a little less story devellopment yet to really base a balanced opinion upon, but the idea sounds promising. (and as long as you do not pair B/S, I think it's going to be great :-) )

And I agree with Cutiepie; if Charmed has rules about demons and magic at all, they are inconsistend at best. (They seem mostly tied to culture/religion, whereas whereas by BTVS they are more sience-like, practicioners could keep their own religion as long as powerfull or detailed) Please be carefull when combining it, we BTVS-readers tend to fall over canon-conflicting details :grin:

And my Charmedknowledge is a little rusty, but weren;t Paige's (adopted) parents Christian-religious? Because Willow is Jewish, so as wrote her as her cousin, you 'll probebly have to bring it up at some point. Oh, and how did she know the Halliwells are witches? Did she read rumors on the internet after Paiges call/mail? Or had she heared about them before?
Review By [MBB] • Date [26 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Persuaded By Evil" from CharmingStar
Review:
Its a good start i hope that you continue really soon
Review By [CharmingStar] • Date [26 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Persuaded By Evil" from Cutiepie
Review:
Hmm . . . I don't know if I can picture Paige as being actually evil. Striking off on her own and doing what she can to help people, yes. Selfish maybe. But not evil. Of course, I've always thought that the rules regarding magic use on Charmed were a bit inconsistant. Nothing for personal gain, except when it coincides with the plot. =S I'll be reading to find out where you go with this one. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [9 Oct 04] • Not Rated
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