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Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from MamaLadyWolf
Review:
this is a really great story and I really wish there was more of it to read. It is fun and different from the standard. Too bad there isn't more to it.
Review By [MamaLadyWolf] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from Levinhi
Review:
I like this story so far.Please,please,please update it.soon,preferably.I'm not trying to whine,but I really like this and I want to see what happens next,please.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'd also like to write what happens next, unfortunatly I don't think I'll be able to find the time to write any time soon.

The Unicorn
Review By [Levinhi] • Date [7 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from ashez
Review:
All the good fics die young don't they? This is probably the third time in so many years I've read this fic, and it's still really good (the formatting's kinda messed up though). The part where Richie gets run over still cracks me up.
Review By [ashez] • Date [10 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from Elleria
Review:
This is very interesting and amusing. I'm looking forward to the next bit. Please update soon.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [23 Nov 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 4: Rise and...shine?" from Blackguard
Review:
This is a great fic so far but i feel very sorry for Richie
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [30 Oct 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from Stormy
Review:
Poor Richie!! Don't really blame Xander though. Good so far, keep going!!!!!
Review By [Stormy] • Date [22 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from rob2
Review:
I really like this story, the idea of Xander freaking out and running down poor Richie is such an interesting change from the standard 'Wow, so I'm and immortal' story. And I could so see Xander getting freaked considering his background. But I am looking forward to Methos and Xander meeting. ;)


Rob
Review By [rob2] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch.1 First death" from Caliadragon
Review:
I just realized I gave you the wrong spelling for Mac's name. Its MacLeod.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from Caliadragon
Review:
I'm really enjoying this and I look forward to how Xander deals with the truth, but I do suggest that you go back in and edit the chapter where you were talking to Methos. It's McCloud and Mac should be capitalized.

Thanks


calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked the start of your story. Yes, after living on the Hellmouth, a Scooby attacks first and asks questions later. I think Xander taught Richie a nice lesson in not making assumptions. Lol! I hope you continue to write as I find your story interesting.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 5: Phone calls" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The plot continues to be interesting in the immediacey of the character moments/characterization, and I'm able to follow the AU element that you set up. You do what a proofreader or beta so that you get chacter names's spelled right, however. Tara and MacLeod.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of story "Surprise, surprise" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is really good. I like where your going with this and look forward to seeing what happens next.

Thanks

calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [15 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Surprise, surprise" from malaskor
Review:
Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned next.

Just one thing: the formating is a bit messed up - e.g. the first word of a paragraph having its own line.
Maybe you should look it over again.
Review By [malaskor] • Date [13 Oct 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Surprise, surprise" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting start. I'm enjoying the pacing and the storytelling so far.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Oct 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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