Great job translating the landscape. I was a little hesitant at the start because I couldn't imagine how you would make it work. Pitch Black depended so much on the visuals, even in the dark. You did an amazing job with that and still kept up the SG1 characterization.
I would like to see what you would do with The Chronicles of Riddick.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [12 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Nice devellopped world. I like how you mention the physical chances of such a balanced solar constellation existing, and the evolution it ment to the world.
When reading in the discription that it was a planet with 3 suns I first asumed it would be Pylea, and when I later read it was a dry planet I asumed it was from somewere in the future. only when i finished it I noticed it was a non-crosover.
Review of chapter "Act One: Exploration" from Duchess
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Hey, I like the idea for this cross and that's a VERY interesting theory for the huge carcass! I am now looking forward to more of this one and hope to see it soon. *two thumbs up so far*
Review By [Duchess] • Date [25 Feb 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act One: Exploration" from lyapunov
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This story is looking great. I love your writing style and the group dynamic between the characters is perfect. Can't wait to see where you're gonna take this. Post more soon please!!
Review By [lyapunov] • Date [19 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act One: Exploration" from CPTSkip
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I really like the start of your story. You've done a nice job with the characterizations and I could feel the heat. I look forward to finding out What Comes Next.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Oct 04] • Not Rated
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