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Review of chapter "5" from banditdoz
Ooooo now this looks interesting :D
Comments from author:
Thanks. Maybe my muse show take some renewed interest in it, now. ;-)
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [8 Dec 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from Hanzo
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bloodlines" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Sorry pal, but this one is not doing it for me. I guess it's just that I wasn't impressed with the little I saw of Underworld, but the whole Vampire vs Werewolves thing doesn't interest me at all. I'm going to have to pass on reading the rest of this, and hope your muse provides more of your other stories, especially "You Wouldn't Like Me When I'm Angry" and the sequal that is set in Sunnydale.

Comments from author:
Not a problem, buddy. Different tastes for different people.

And I am trying to get something done with the next chapter of YWLMWIA, as Real Life (tm0 permits. ;-(
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from Morgomir
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I intend to.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from CPTSkip
Nice to see you have updated this very interesting story of yours. I can see who I think are some of the "people" involved in the prophesy. I look forward to seeing how close I am to your vision of the future of your story. I almost feel sorry for the poor lycans and non-demonic vamps when they go after Willow. But not very much. I also almost feel sorry for how William the Bloody is going to be experiencing the Way of Pain on his way to the Way of the Dustpan. Soon, I hope. Lol! I really look forward to more of your story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, man. I appreciate your reviewing.

All I can say right now is that there is much blood and violence heading in the Scoobies' direction.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from MistofRainbows
The main issue with the story as I see it, William was a nice guy in life. Thus when he gets his soul back he would once again be if not as nice as he was at least better than a crazed killer. Shrugs, either way, I haven't seen enough of a description of the underworld vamp's opinions on demonic vamps. Xander isn't supposed to be adopted so it's au there as well. It's annoying that given what Buffy knows about Xander's family she wouldn't think to ask what the hell a relative of his was doing at the hospital. So a number of logic issues, in my opinion. As for the rest so far it's interesting.
Comments from author:
You're assuming that Spike has regained his soul in this 'verse, just as he allegedly did in the Joss-verse, which is something I do not necessarily agree with, especially the unspecified restriction that having a soul makes one a good person.

And as far as Buffy not mentioning Xander's alleged cousin's visit, that's something that will be addressed in an upcoming chapter.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from Thewander
nice job on this cant wait for more
Comments from author:
Thanks, man. Appreciate your review.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from eriktheviking
Great writing as always, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from Roth
Over all the story is really good. Just 2 beefs. First.... Why does everybody change Buffy's name to Elizabeth. Everytime I read that it just breaks the world being written about for me. The second thing is, using Spike as a big bad (or one of them) is a good idea, except that at this point he still has the chip in his head and cannot harm humans, on his own. The bit with the First proved that could be gotten around by a powerful enough outside source. Where did the chip go or who was that outside source?

As for Joss being convinced that having a soul made you good, what about Warren Mears, The Swim Coach, the Little League Coach, Invisible Girl and Ethan Rayne? All of them had souls. All of them were bad guys.
Comments from author:
When I first started reading fanfic, it seemed as though everyone was using Elizabeth as Buffy's actual name, and it's something I've continued.

And as far as Spike is concerned, this takes place in an alternate 'verse that branched off after Season six's 'Grave,' as I noted in the beginning of this story If you recall, Spike left Sunnydale after being rejected by Buffy, looking for some way to get rid of the chip in his head, so he can 'give that bitch what she really deserves,' or similar words to that effect, and was shown undergoing some sort of ritual with an unidentified demon in Africa. What the results of that series of events might be hasn't been fully shown yet.

And my observation about souls had to do with Crackhead Joss' and Marty Noxious' repeated comments that because Spike now had his soul, he was a good guy, despite the fact that his behavior was essentially unchanged and identical to his behavior prior to regaining his soul when he was an unmitigated bastard who tried to kill Buffy, Xander, Willow and Giles numerous times. Therefore, it seemed to me that they both seemed to think that possessing a soul automatically makes one a good person with no obligation to try to atone for whatever evil they'd committed prior to regaining one's soul. This viewpoint made no sense to me, given the way they had portrayed Angel for several years previously.
Review By [Roth] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from Eureka
Wow very good. So this William would be one of the "Big Bads" that are coming into town to play?
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
It certainly seems like that, doesn't it? The next chapter won't be nearly as long showing up.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from LordCorwin
Great update, I look forward to the next installment .. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. My muse seems to be interested int his story again, so the next chapter shouldn't be as long coming.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from MistieMossflower
This story is great and I hope that you haven't abandoned it and will update it really, really soon. ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks for commenting.

Truthfully, my muse has been ignoring this story for quite a while now, so I'm not sure whether or not I'll be picking it up again, but she has been inspired to look over some of my older stories lately, so there may yet be hope. ;-)
Review By [MistieMossflower] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from athanor
So, if the female Lycan is named Ellen Salt, and she's related somehow to Veruca, that would make Veruca's full name...

Maybe you could write a scene mentioning that Veruca hates geese? I can just see a flashback scene (I want Oz for myself and I want him NOW!)

I always thought there was something unnatural about Willy Wonka. After all, where do you think Ethan Rayne got all those chocolate bars?

I officially love everything you've written, even the abandoned fics. Keep up the great work.

(edit) LOL Veruca Salt was the spoiled girl in Willy Wonka who wanted a goose that laid a golden egg and during her tantrum fell down a chute into an incinerator. I thought you were being funny. That'll teach me to review when I'm half asleep.
Comments from author:
First off, thanks for reviewing. I appreciate hearing what you have to say about any of my stories.

Second, I'm not sure what you're talking about with respect to the Ellen Salt comment. If you think I'm cross-referencing another story or series, I'm not.

As far as Willy Wonka is concerned, you're quite correct - he is *extremely* strange!

And Bloodlines is not so much abandoned as it is on hiatus until my muse is willing to work on it again. ;-(

Thanks again for reviewing.
Review By [athanor] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from Jonathan

Last night, I saw Underworld for the first time, and I liked it. I remembered you starting a cross with it, so I wanted to read it. Glad I did. I can't wait for further installments. The Xander/Primal Xander scenes were great, and look forward to the BX-ness. Great work, bro, and keep it up. Nice way to tie in Veruca btw.
Comments from author:
Thanks, buddy. My muse has decided she's ignoring this one at the moment, so I'm not sure when I'll be posting a new chapter, but it's definitely not abandoned.
Review By [Jonathan] • Date [15 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from CPTSkip
This is a great story. I loved what the Lycans thought they knew about the Scoobies. There are still so many freaking secrets and hints as to what is really going on that I can't wait to find out what is actually going on. Lol! Please keep writing this very interesting story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Dec 04] • Not Rated
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