Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Forever and a Day

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "13" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
Any chance of finishing this? I really like it.
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Thoroughly enjoyable as always.

Been a while since I read this so I re-read the whole thing through - and that led to me having observations on Chapter 6 where I think there might be a continuity glitch.

You refer to Dawn and her friends being out in Michelle's car. You mention Dawn having no driving licence. But Xander gave the wheel to Dawn while he endured brain-splitting agony. I'm English so things may be different in the US - but I'd have thought that if Dawn doesn't have a licence control of the car would be given back to Michelle or someone else?

Best,

~ Jewel
Comments from author:
Yeah, that is a sort of screw-up, isn't it? o.0

On the other hand, I could suggest that Dawn had a learner's permit (the preliminary step here in the States to getting a driver's license), and that as long as Xander or another licensed driver was in the car, she could legally get behind the wheel. ;-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [27 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from FireWolfe
Review:
Love to see more. This Xander is a worthwhile person. Sometimes he is a bit of a git. Not to superpowered but enough so he's helpful and it makes him not a jealous ass like he was in the origional. He had potential to be a great character but Joss screwed him and the gang big time.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.

And *ALL* of the characters were portrayed as unlikeable idiots at one time or another over the course of the show. Joss and Marti constantly screwed *everyone* over as far as characterization went.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "13" from deathgeonous
Review:
Someday you really need to continue this. Well, thanks for writing what you did of it, and good bye for now.
Comments from author:
This one is definitely slated to be worked on soon. My muse has finally taken a renewed interest in this story. ;-)
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "13" from locard
Review:
Ok, great story here but I am very confused on a couple of things. After you put so much time and effort into this story why did you drop it? It is very clear that you put a lot of thought and heart into this story then to drop it 4 years ago then pick up another story with the NCIS crew, why? I am hoping that something happen and the site just drop the rest of this story and you just didn't know because I would love to know how you work the rest out.
Comments from author:
My muse was occupied with other things than this story for a while, but I'm working on the next chapter (along with several other updates for my other stories), so it shouldn't be too long before I can post it.

And my muse simply decided that this would fit in well with my current story, 'Slayer, Sister, Mother, Daughter.'
Review By [locard] • Date [20 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "13" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
hope your muse returns to this tale. very enjoyable reading, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. ;-)

I hope to get the next chapter done in the near future, but sometimes, my muse has the attention span of a sugared-up five-year-old. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
"an OLD friend of the family" that brought back memories of a excellent series of novels from many,many years ago. thanks for your fine tale and those memories.
Comments from author:
That possible interpretation and/or reference never occurred to me when I was writing that, man. 0.0

Thanks for pointing that out, and for reminding me of some classic literature, too. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from FireWolfe
Review:
Hope this piece comes back to life oneday soon. I love the idea of it a lot. I look forward to seeing more. I just stumbled onto it and read it start to finish well done .
Comments from author:
Don't worry about that, at all. I'm working on the next chapter, and it's just a matter of time until it shows up.

Glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from DragonBard
Review:
Not a fan of the Wes/Cordy relationship.

Would have preferred him with Fred (or maybe even a redeemed Lilah.)
Comments from author:
I picked that particular 'ship mostly because I haven't seen it very much at all.

And I do much prefer Wes with Fred, as opposed to Lilah, although I have mentioned a Wes/Lilah pairing in my 'Best Served Cold - Second Helpings' story.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "13" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, I like the telepathy bit that Buffy and Xander have going on!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Yeah, something like that would definitely change how things develop between people.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [13 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from loretta
Review:
this is a great story! please please please update it soon
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

I'm waiting on my muse to let me know what she wants me to write, next. ;-)
Review By [loretta] • Date [14 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "13" from ebony
Review:
I ran across this saved in my favorites and just finished reading it again, even though it has been a long time since the last update I am still hoping that this will be finished.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story, so far. My muse seems to be blocked on this one, at present, but I'm hoping that clears up soon.
Review By [ebony] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from AnFan
Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story. The interactions between the characters is great. I also like how you've integrated the Highlander series. It's an interesting cross.

It looks like things are ready to explode into a kind of open warfare. The added crossover into the comicverse can't have made things any easier to continue this story.

I do hope that it isn't dead though. If your muse has any more interest in this story, I hope it's enough to get another chapter. :) I'm probably going to have to watch for any new work from you as well. I've noticed that I like a lot of the work you've published here. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Unfortunately, my muse has been ignoring this story, too, along with several of my other older stories, and I'd love t be able to get more done on this, since I know where I'm going with it.

And as far as I'm concerned, the so-called 'Season Eight' comic series doesn't exist, especially in this particular universe. ;-)
Review By [AnFan] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from LaraBr
Review:
Good story and nicely written. Looking forward to it's continuation.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I'm waiting on my muse to cooperate and get the next chapter out.
Review By [LaraBr] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from bookworm
Review:
Just went back and reread this today, plus the chapter I hadn't. It is perhaps a little super-powered, but then, who doesn't want to fix things up every now and then? Here's a nudge for the muse, anyway.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the favorable comment, and I'll pass the request along to my muse. ;-)
Review By [bookworm] • Date [27 May 11] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 5 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking