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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Wise
Review:
The characters here are massively OOC. They don't read like Xander, Faith, and Ash. They read like aliens from another planet trying to imitate Xander, Faith, and Ash. Not a terrible story, but the characterisation needs some serious work. Also, good grammar is your friend.

All that to say, it reads like a first draft. A revision or two (with feedback from competent beta readers) would do this tale a world of good.
Comments from author:
Wise, keep in mind this is one of my first fics. I never wrote a F/X story at the time. This fic was posted back in 2001 at ff.net. When TTH opened, i posted it here. my writing has changed allot since then. If you want to see what i mean, try reading my newer work.

but, im proud of this fic. its my first completed one. and my first non-BX story. After reading Of Chainsaws and Shotguns (a fic by Danii) I wanted to try my own evil dead/buffy cross. So, this is the result.
Review By [Wise] • Date [19 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of story "The Necronomicon Reopens" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Very interesting story, can't wait for to read more.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Apr 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Necronomicon Reopens" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I hate to see a story without a review and since this one is probably my favorite of your stories I thought I would tell you again how much I enjoyed it. To anyone reading the reviews trying to decide to read the story or not - this is a wonderful story and well worth the time to read it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [18 Jan 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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