I have a couple of minor issues with spelling and grammar (Hey, I edit for some friends. You get to be obsessive.) but nothing that could possibly spoil the fun.
Very, VERY good job!
Review By [Itinerant] • Date [27 May 12] • Not Rated
Ignore Downery, there's nothing at all wrong with a guy having fewer partners than his wife. My husband doesn't particularily mind, anyway. Wonderful story, maybe you'll end up writing a sequel and posting it at some point? You wrapped everything up nicely, but I like the world you created and I like Vincent a lot, would not mind reading more at all.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Not bad at all. Would've enjoyed it a lot more if you mentioned Xander having some flings during his travel before he met Faith. Don't really like harems but i also hate the other end where Xander only get to be with one woman before hooking up in a serious relationship with a woman that's been with dozens. At least let the man sample 4 or 5 before getting tied down to someone.
Review By [Downery] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Katrina
