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Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from LancerFourSeven
Review:
Okay, breaks over, time to get back to work and finish this thing. Or at least add another chapter.

Good story, good series. It started a little slow, but I found myself drawn in more and more.
Review By [LancerFourSeven] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from DrDamage
Review:
The writing here is first rate, the characters and dialog well done. However, I find it difficult to maintain interest in a story when the author tries to weave as many threads as you are working with here. Personal preference, I suppose, but when I'm left wondering, chapter after chapter, what's going on with this character or that and what they're going to do about the situation we last saw them in, my attention starts to drift.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [16 May 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from wdlwbt
Review:
Wow! I just found this story today and thought it was great. Hoping for something new soon?
Review By [wdlwbt] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice to see this continuing - not sure I quite see Ellie as a realistic political candidate, but I'll be interested to see what you do with it.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never lost our nerve" from Bobboky
Review:
this story is pretty amazing
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That sees beyond the years" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
An interesting series. Jumps around a bit which makes it difficult to keep track of, but still fascinating.
Comments from author:
I know it jumps around - and it's probably going to be doing it a lot more... ;)

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Land where my fathers died" from Gaeriel
Review:
I just read through all the prequels to Penultimate and the existing chapters for the story. You have completely hooked me. A very imaginative AU and multi-cross universe. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing this!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Gaeriel] • Date [19 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Land where my fathers died" from Cataclysmic
Review:
Yay, yay, yay!!! Thankyou for the update, it was great, though I am dying for the bit where Dawn finds Graham etc etc etc! thanks
Comments from author:
Um, thanks.

I think you're going to have to wait for that part a bit though - it's not scheduled for a good while yet. ;D
Review By [Cataclysmic] • Date [17 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And guide her..." from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! I'm so glad you've updated your story. Your dialog is quite humorous and even sounds right for the characters. I still have no idea of how you are going to insert Dawn into your story and just where you are going with this story, but I really want to read more. So write more! Please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let mortal tongues awake" from Cataclysmic
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I Love the Penultimate series :) when will we see the next update? can't wait for Graham to find out about James and everything to all come together, great story, please please please update soon!
Review By [Cataclysmic] • Date [25 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let mortal tongues awake" from MusingsOfApathy
Review:
Good writing so far, and I expect that you will start to stitch the BTVS parts to the WW parts soon. I like the addition of the HP characters but cannot help but wonder where they will enter into the picture or if they are just there for distraction or interest.

Thanks for writing.

Mike.
Review By [MusingsOfApathy] • Date [28 Mar 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3. The old church bell will peel with joy" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
I really like this series and hope you keep it going. Nice introduction of various characters into the Westwing environment.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [22 Mar 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3. The old church bell will peel with joy" from Hecatonchires
Review:
I wondered how that was going to link in. So Graham is a relative of the Bartletts, sucking them into the slayers. Nice.
Comments from author:
:) Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [10 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3. The old church bell will peel with joy" from idrilis
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A small critism; while it is possible to fly tromsø to trondheim to oslo, it would be far more likely for graham to fly tromsø to oslo, especially as he is coming in on the longyearbyen flight, which actually goes to oslo with a short layover in tromsø; its the frequently the same plane. unless he was flying by a different airline from tromsø down, however it is quite unlikely. so while impressed you mentioned the rocking city that is tromsø, kinda not quite ringing true to someone who knows the area. er also, what exactly was graham supposed to be doing in svalbard? its mostly mining and such like...
ok and i admit this is quite a nitpicking review, but anachronisms annoy:)
Comments from author:
Thanks for pointing it out.

I actually knew it, have friend who lived in Longyearbyen for a year, but *mindboggles* it's one of the things that I apparently hadn't nitpicked from the first draft, when he was stopping off in Trondheim to do something with the zombie-like St.Olav. ... I never said I was normal.

Ah, the thing Graham and his team was doing at Svalbard? Top Secret Military stuff... ;) They seem to have teams in the jungle, so why not up with the ice?

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [idrilis] • Date [10 Feb 05] • Not Rated
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