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Review of chapter "NSFW" from deamon
Review:
hey since xande ris a girl now will he be interested in guys? Cuz I can never read stories where he is interested in guys where he is a girl or not.
Review By [deamon] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NSFW" from FariaLyton
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Any possible chance of writing more of this?
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NSFW" from Questara
Review:
Very enjoyable thus far, any chance of this continuing and if so, any of the other Guardians going to show up?
Review By [Questara] • Date [3 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NSFW" from tiggergirl
Review:
damn now that was funny... I think you have done a good job so for,, maybe get a beta to look at somethings and be a devils advocate type to question plot and motives and such. Let me know if you need a hand.

keep up the good work.

hugs,

tara
Review By [tiggergirl] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NSFW" from Jossalyn
Review:
I love it so update soon
Review By [Jossalyn] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NSFW" from purrfus
Review:
I guess I'm glad I really don't know much about the SM stuff, because I am free to enjoy your AU for itself.

More Please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [7 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NSFW" from darkmagician
Review:
I'm confused. First he was Makoto (Lita), then this thing with the armor and spear, then a mention of Zuul (Ghostbusters). WTF? There was also a mention of Hotaru (Saturn). Is he Hotaru, Lita, or someone else entirely?
Comments from author:
He dressed up as Makoto.

As noted in an Authors note, I am seriously screwing with SM canon. The information out there in Buffy about SM is roughly the same as what the SM canon is, but it's a funhouse reflection of what I'm saying actually /is/ in their universe. It's AU.

The Zuul thing is a throwaway joke.

Saturn is mentioned in Giles's copy of 'Really Old Book about Really Old Things Discovered in Strange, Out of the Way Locations Guarded by People Who Could Not Logically Exist There.' The title is a bit unwieldy, but, whatcha going to do?
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [7 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Free gelding with every purchase!" from Markelo
Review:
This story is very funny! I love this plotline of Xander becoming female thanks to Halloween with Ethan.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [5 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Free gelding with every purchase!" from zafaran
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Could we have more of this story, please? The posting at TtH is marked as incomplete, and I'd love to find out what happens next. You've got so much potential in the Giles/Xander mentor/parent/child relationship you are building, and I can't wait to find out what Giles does to Xander's parents now that he has proof of some type of abuse. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [24 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free gelding with every purchase!" from Bobboky
Review:
cool, will you let him change back someday?
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free gelding with every purchase!" from (Recent Donor)tammin
Review:
Go story so far, It looks like he is going to have to watch Sailor Moon to get so idea about his body and abilities.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "He turned invisible and flew away!" from superbrutal
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I've got no criticsm for you, constructive or otherwise. Sorry.

I don't know too much about Salior moon but what I can't tell your doing a good job.

Please continue.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [3 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "He turned invisible and flew away!" from Rivana
Review:
Don't know if I should laugh or cry. Poor Xander. Sex change stories can be difficult to write, you're doing good so far I would say as long as you start to center some more on Xander himself. It's strange when you have a Xander centric story, but tell it from a great distance if you know what I mean. Interesting to see where this may lead. Good job.
Review By [Rivana] • Date [3 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "He turned invisible and flew away!" from DanaShort
Review:
"...Four hundred hits, and not one review...It's not like I wanted that much, just one review per hundred unique hits or so would be enough."

Laughs maniacally!

Laughs some more!

Finally settles down. Looks at the stats from Act 1 of his own book-length story, and starts laughing again...

Calms a bit. Relays reason for mirth... My ode to whatever, a mostly Highlanderish story, 16 of 26 chapters posted to this site, 2053 hits, and 5, yeah, 5 reviews. Oh, and it's not a short story, the posted part running 64277 words (yours is a baby by comparison - at 4135 words. Yet you have gotten 1423 hits for your 4 chapters, and 9 reviews. 9! And you complain.

Laughs more. Almost cries...

Oh well... Hopefully despite my mirth, you shall speedily post the next part. I can hardly wait to see what Xander does when he wakes up!

Tomorrow? Please? If you do, I may post more of my monster. :)
Comments from author:
Well, considering that I've left other fics languishing for years, literally...but not this one, I feel inspired about it at the moment.

The main thing is that this is a piece of light reading. The plot design was made in about 5 minutes of random thought, the first chapter was written in roughly 19 minutes, and no chapter yet has taken longer than an hour to actually write. Heck, none of it is preread, and only chapter 4 has gone through a spell/grammer checker. Your story...not quite so. Plus, you know, Buffy actually gets a mention. *shrugs*
Review By [DanaShort] • Date [2 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "He turned invisible and flew away!" from CPTSkip
Review:
Sorry I haven't made any comments before this. I like your story. I am not that familiar with anime characters, but you have done a good job of filling us ignorant ones in on what is going on. Well, I am still confused by a lot, but I am sure you will clear everything up. Hint, hint. Please write more as I find your story interesting and you've done an excellent job with all your Buffy characters. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Comments from author:
I wouldn't worry too much about specific anime characters..when writing a story, I usually assume that the readers are familiar with the 'base' universe, (in this case Buffy) and completely unfamiliar with any add ins.

Add that to the fact that I'm screwing with Sailor Moon so much, even a die hard fan probably wouldn't recognize it. XD
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Feb 05] • Not Rated
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