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Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
fine tale. thank you for the excellent read.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from pstibbons
Review:
Great story!
Review By [pstibbons] • Date [12 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Not too shabby...

Nope, not too shabby at all.

I have to admit, Daniel/Tara isn't a pairing I would have thought of myself, but once I got past my initial scepticism, they're actually kind of cute together.

Plus, you clearly explain how it ended up happening; Tara DEFINITELY qualifies for the 'spiritual' aspects necessary to Ascend at the end, and the explanation that gender didn't MEAN as much on the higher planes certainly makes sense when explaining why Tara's now interested in a GUY.

Admittedly, I would have preferred it if ANGEL had been there rather than Spike- I always preferred him as a character-, but you explained why he's staying out of sight at the moment following the Black Thorn's defeat, so that's all right.

Keep up the good work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Thank you for a touching and well thought out story. Like Tara, it was sweet and understated and powerful.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from Dragonelf
Review:
Very nice story.

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Remember tonight... for it is the beginning of always.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from purrfus
Review:
Wonderful to have a Tara focused story - definitely not enough of those around. Interesting interactions between the Scoobies and the SGC. Would like to see more.

Some parts were a bit choppy, but overall it was well put together.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from Keshkreature
Review:
Very awesome story. I loved your resolution, and all the parts before. The way they found Tara was rather ingenious too. =)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I loved this! Thanks so much for writing a Tara-centric crossover story, and doing it so very well. "Fine Lines" did justice both to the bright spirit that was Tara (as well as her almost-parental relationship with Dawn, especially) and to the SG1 characters and mythology. Plus, I loved the chance to see post-"Not Fade Away" Spike and Illyria joining with emotionally healthy Faith and Teal'c and Sam in that vampire-kicking rescue mission offworld. Tara deserved something like this, and thank you for writing it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Very interesting. I liked the idea of Tara/Daniel very much. On to the sequel... looks like I'll be up late tonight.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [25 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from Odjn
Review:
Hmm. I'm not sure I like the whole vampire-goa'uld thing, but I absolutely adore the underlying romance between Tara and Daniel. It's such an unconventional pairing!
Review By [Odjn] • Date [25 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from banner
Review:
Wonderful story. The detail and characterizations were perfect - and I love the way you wove the two 'verses together.
Do Please write a sequel.
Review By [banner] • Date [4 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from Duchess
Review:
This was a great story! Lots of attention to details from both series and a completely believable change in Tara due to the shared experiences with Daniel. You seem to have almost provided the two of them with a family with the addition of Malita to the mix and her being drawn so to Tara. *vbg* It's too cute and sweet and darling! I've GOT to hurry up and start reading your sequel! :):):)
Review By [Duchess] • Date [2 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Beautiful fic idea! I really enjoyed the way you pulled it all together.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Hopefully Shelter will live up to this one. It is having a bit more of a hard time coming together. Jes
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [28 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten & Epilogue" from magicfaerie
Review:
awwww! this was so happy! i am SO glad of the way you ended it, especially that you bent the rules and tara remembered her life. is there something in that? like some special reason why she remembered but daniel didn't? hehe, "spacemonkey". oh man, yay for sequels! you rock!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. I promised a happy one, didn't I? :)
As for why Tara remembered and Daniel didn't, that will be discussed in the sequel, because trust me, Tara will be doing a bit of soul searching for answers. Her magic is wonky and there are so many questions that she has. Of course that will be one storyline of several in the sequel, which you probably guessed if you read the sneak peek. Thanks for all the support! Jes
Review By [magicfaerie] • Date [27 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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