Interesting, and pretty good as well. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

I often wondered why no one simply killed the incompetents at the Ministry of Magic. Why the Malfoys were not killed or at least thrown into prison. All evil needs to win is for good to be stupid. There was a WAR going on in the wizarding world, when you are at war with your life and the lives of others at risk you do NOT fight fair! Most wizards in Harry's world are brain dead idiots. I would have gotten guns, explosives, any weapon I could, and simply killed any that did not fight with me against the dark lord. I would have gotten muggle help too!

wonderful fic. said a lot in a few chapters, which is cool. this was a fun read.

I am realy enjoying this story. it's fun, and i gotta say i love the willow/Severus paring..yep..this is a keeper!! gonna write more? Please?
Thanks!
Ciao!
S~W

Thanks for sharing the story -- and showing all kinds of caring, frienships and familial ties.

Wow, way to go with the vented anger in this story. The characterization is good, though the venting and the lecturing goes on a little too long for my tastes. Harry and Ron aren't evil, they just assume that what they were taught is the way, because is favors them. I hope you give them a chance, even if it is off-screen to have fruitful lives.

Uh- uh -- how much retribution physically will Severus be met.

Did a bit of a re-read on the earlier chapters. I'm continuing to enjoy this a lot. Nice job of demonstrating very competant Xander.

This is a very interesting story, though moving faster than I expected. Not that that's a bad thing, as long as you explain all the backstory! I can't wait for the next part. I noticed a little inconsistency when you had Buffy say mum instead of mom, but other than that it was great.

This is so good....Please update soon and often.

this is very nice. :) I like the friendship between Willow and Severus. (maybe one day more? *crosses fingers*) can't wait for updates, wanna see what happens next. *g*

I'm liking the forward motion of the plot, and I look forward to more extended scenes,
maybe some with Xander not being as big of a pushover as some wizards might think
a muggle might be... oh and of course more Willow and Severus. Part of the joy of this story is seeing the characters around them, too.

Enjoying the plot movement. Looking forward to Xander matching wits with Ron or some wizard who thinks they can impress or intimidate him. Looking forward to some extended scenes with character interactions.

Very charming. I hope they get to spend either some vacation time or some teaching time together soon.

I really liked this for some of the following reasons: You drew the HP and Jossverse universes giving them depth and visualization, the way you defined each of the relationships that of Giles and Severus, that of Willow and Giles and that beginning of Severus and Willow. I also really liked how you could show an outsider's view and an insider's view.