I would love to see more of this. It would be great to find out what she does to them! MD.
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I originally intended for this to be a prelude for a SG cross. The idiots are NID and when Willow's War Dogs swept through they rescued several people including clone!Danny. I always thought it was harsh for Mini-meJack to lose all his friends and life.
This was awesome! If you ever plan a continuation I will definitely want to read it.
It was a new approach - I like that they had actual code words to indicate what was going on. Sounds like Xander was brainwashed - hope they can fix that without any of his other possessions messing things up.