cute.

I like it! *bounces up and down excitedly* This is so...Doylish. Yes, I know Doylish is not a word, and I'm not particularly certain I care at the moment.

*calms down* Alright, so the characterization is well written. The drabble is, as all drabbles are supposed to be, short and to the point without losing the character insight it's supposed to provide.

I didn't notice any horrible spelling or grammatical errors.

....Thank you for writing me such a nice drabble. Even if I was a little confused by the portal thing. Guess I'll have to read it again to make sense of it.

Keep up the good work.