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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from spring
Review:
PLEASE please please please tell me that you ARE going to finish this wonderful fic. I love what you have so far and stopping here is just beyond evil. Again I love this wonderful fic more soon please.
Review By [spring] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from zafaran
Review:
Any chance of getting more chapters on this story? You've got an interesting premise here, and I'd like to find out what happens in the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [18 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from LadyCarpathian
Review:
Why hasn't this been updated in almost a year?????
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [7 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from raven
Review:
Nice idea, and the revisions helped. Most of my problems have been addressed by other reviewers (and some already repaired) so I won't add more. Only continuing problem I noticed was flooing-you don't drop the powder on your head, but at your feet, clearly stating your destination and keeping all limbs and baggage close to your body. Bit of a trouble with Harry's transportation too-why not apparate like the Order did before-right to the gates? Or perhaps, floo to the Headmasters office?
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. The main reason why Harry didn't come to Dumbledore's office a more convenient way is that in the next chapter Harry remembers the events that happened since OOTP while walking to the office.
Review By [raven] • Date [8 Dec 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 2 revised" from Zira
Review:
Aw...poor Harry - to go back to the madhouse. Anyway, what happened between Ginny and Harry? Are Hermione and Ron together? Will Draco be in this story?

Sorry about all the questions. Anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait to read what happens next.
Comments from author:
What happened to Ginny will be discussed in a future chapter. Ron and Hermione got married shortly after graduating. Draco will be in the story at some point. Thanks for your comments.
Wayne
Review By [Zira] • Date [17 Nov 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 2 revised" from malaskor
Review:
Good chapter - but please explain in a future chapter what was up with Ginny (as in death or dumping or something else?). It can't have been pretty.

Looking forward to see how it goes on.

Keep it up and thanks for sharing
Review By [malaskor] • Date [16 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Revised" from Zira
Review:
A little more history would be nice. How does Giles know about the wizarding world? Why would everyone else have been told? Surely if Buffy knew when both she and Dawn were in Rome, something would have been said. Why did Dawn accept the position so eagerly? I know she wants to know about her 'key' background, but no one would rush so quickly into making a decision like this.

That said, it is a brilliant ficlet or start to a larger story. Is it going to be continued, because that would be kinda cool!

Loadsa love, Zira
Review By [Zira] • Date [16 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Revised" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A lovely concept. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Revised" from (Past Donor)Kiara
Review:
I good start with an interesting story. Just try not to make everything too idealistic e.g. Dawn's reaction to finding out theres a whole other world is just- okay I'll take the job.
Thanks for sharing!
Kiara
xxx
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review, I think I'll rework this chapter a little more.
-Wayne
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiara] • Date [15 Nov 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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