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Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from Glumski
Review:
Though this story entertained me a lot it feeled as if it didn't really... I don't know... get off. That might be because it unfortunately ended during the introductory phase (which is quote long) and before the 'real' action could start. Or maybe the golden thread went missing. I'm not sure. Well, anyway...
The dialogues truly are solid gold. I've never before laughed out loud (literally, not in the usual internet "I lol'd" way) so many times; the characters are just as witty as they were in the show. I'm really, really glad I found this story because of this. Even if the rest was horrific (which it isn't), the story would still be worth reading because of this.
The characters are also well done, maybe a little bland in the last chapter(s), though that might just be because the underlying tone got more serious then and therefore the number of witty remarks decreased...
The story I'm not so sure of unfortunately. There definitely were not big horrible errors or continuity problems or plot holes, but that golden thread seemed to be missing. It seems like this story was planned to be quite long and therefore it is entirely possible that it was still in the introductory phase when you stopped posting chapters. Or you just wrote as you went, which is a completely okay way of doing this, but can cause the lack of the golden thread.
Apart from that, this was pretty good.
Review By [Glumski] • Date [7 Oct 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from eriktheviking
Review:
Still a great fun read, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from Shadowman
Review:
Very good story. Please come back and continue.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from misdom
Review:
This story was unfinished so I wasn't sure if I wanted to start it but I'm glad I did.

Thanks for writing this and i hope you come back and wrap it up someday.
Review By [misdom] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from HMaxMarius
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Ya had to leave it there didn't ya...

Faith, pantsless, wearing an oversized military jacket...
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from Starfox
Review:
Great and funny story, with a change of tone at times - emotional shoting match between Riley and Buffy - like the series.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from nightshadowlife
Review:
I love this story!!!! Would love to see you update it!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from chrysanthemum
Review:
Great story, and utterly hilarious :)
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Just re-read this and loved it all over again. I do hope you'll come back to it some day.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from Vickzie
Review:
Ha, cool story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from Vickzie
Review:
Ha, cool story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from tomst
Review:
i do hope you decide to finish this story it very good
Review By [tomst] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from Netchka
Review:
Wow, what a story! I hope the next chapters are coming soon? Can't wait.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from JimmX
Review:
Buffy, Dawn *and* Faith at SGC? That's rockin'. :-)
Given the age, I'm guessing this is abandoned, but it was fun, thanks.
Review By [JimmX] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Portals, Pummellings, and Passions" from HebiR
Review:
Any chance this fic lives?
Review By [HebiR] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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