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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from dinkscythe
One of the best crossovers I've read, with awesome and believable interactions between the characters of the two fandoms. Solid characterizations and complex drama. I love that the two sides don't instantly become best friends, nor does one try to 'fix' everything wrong with the other.
Review By [dinkscythe] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seven: Part Five" from SixPerfections
You like Faith and Anita gettin cozy huh? Not that I'm gonna complain :P
Review By [SixPerfections] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seven: Part Three" from SixPerfections
Ok, Faith and Anita kissing and Anita liking it (even if it was through Richard)? I so SO did not see that coming. And it was AWESOME =). Even if it turns out to be nothing and was just a bit of Fan Service it was classic. Its pretty cool how it kinda broke the ice between them too even if Anita is feeling all awkward abut further compromising her 'mid western values' and Faith is being all cocky about it. I don't see them ending up together because let's face it who in their right mind wants to get tangled up in Anita's love life? haha. But even that little bit there was cool as shit. Props to you and props to this story. I'm a huge Faith fan and its a pleasant surprise to see her having a large role in this story. It was totally unexpected and I'm excited about it. You write really really well, can't wait to see where this goes :)
Review By [SixPerfections] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from breve
i love this fic.
i don't know why i never pictured faith/richard together before, that'd be hilarious.
love this fic.
Review By [breve] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from LeaFairy
Really great story! Very good interaction between Dawn and Anita.. actually there was very interaction between Dawn and everyone from the AB verse. Poor Dawnie getting kidnapped again, but hey, she basically solved the mystery beforehand, so Yay Dawn! lol.

The additions of Faith, Willow and Buffy in this was just fabulous. I loved Willow and Faith saving the day, sad about Willow being sick/dying(?) though when using magic. I also loved the bits of Faith/Anita and the maybe hints of Faith/Richard. Totally awesome and a little bit sexy too. lol.

Anyhoo, I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [9 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from leelaa
Absolutely superb.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eight: Part Four" from valdimarian
"Paint one group of people with the same brush and soon you don't even think about what you're doing."

I don't know if you realized it, but you just hit the Jewish nail very hard on the head. There's a poem to that effect from the Holocaust ( ) and any Jew older than 13 would likely know it. All in all a really interesting story, but that part really stood out and made me review, can't wait to read further.
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dragonelf
You made an excellent work with this story.

::Starts reading the next story in the series::

Remember that the solitary mortal
is certainly luxurious,probably
superstitious, and possibly mad.
- Samuel Johnson
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Obsidian
BRAVO BRAVO Great story!, thanks
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ContessaD
Absolutely wonderful. I love this story more every time I read it. The characterization is wonderful and I think you avoided every single Dawn or Anita Blake fic cliche. It was such a relief not to read about a superhero Dawn, or a horribly bitchy Buffy, or an one dimensional all powerful and completely sure of myself Anita. Everyone was real, complex and very in character. The plot was well thought out and interesting, and I even almost liked Kennedy. (That would deserve a rave review all by itself.)
Review By [ContessaD] • Date [7 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
--Wednesday began way too early for Dawn, who ironically enough had never been a morning person.

Neat observation :)

I like how you visibly switch tones between Anita's thought and Dawn's. Very well done. Good insider / outsider perspectives :)

Excellent use of Anita's faith.

Nice enemies and cool research-based, terrible trueform description demon construction.

Great way for the Slayers to become legitimate. Smart them being the military's demon-only answer to federal marshals :)

Nice epilogue too, kind of wraps it all up in one neat package. Great story and no wonder you win so many awards :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from purrfus
Just wondering around the site today, and felt a need to read this again.

The story is wonderful, the characterization is great, and the little details like the meaningful glances etc are beautifully done.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from BlameyFomorrii
""Don't you dare start on Dawn."

"But she wasn't here on Friday."

"She was tied up," Anita snapped. "Big bad guys, tried to get a demon to eat Larry?" She glared up at Bert. "And it was all because of this job! They never would have come after her if not for this job! You should consider yourself lucky if she doesn't sue for hazardous working conditions!""

--Oh! I forgot how...greedy-Bert is, and for a moment, thought he was concerned for Dawn's welfare. Loved how Anita dealt with him.

Wonderful ending! Loved this story! Now-on to the Buffy/Rafael sequel!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [30 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eight: Part Four" from BlameyFomorrii
"Dawn frowned. She was getting grumpier and grumpier as the morning dragged on. Did that mean she was getting better? She hadn't felt grumpy the previous night."


"The doctors were going on about super healing and all that crap, but I say it was her winning personality that convinced them to let her out."

--I hate Kennedy. I like this quote.

"A friend?" the nurse loaded the word with sarcasm. Buffy made a small movement, but Dawn beat her to the reaction.

"Yes, a friend!" Dawn exclaimed. "Just because you have a problem with lycanthropes, don't go picking on my friends."

Buffy turned to the nurse, crossing her arms over her chest in an echo of Faith's stance. "I think you should send in another nurse," she said.

Colour high in her cheeks, the nurse turned on her heel and stalked out of the room.

Dawn let out her breath in a hiss. "I hate people like that!""

---Just like when Dawn, Buffy-everyone-stood up for Tara from her family.

Loved this scene so much! I was giggling, and all happy.

"Faith laughed, while Buffy let out a tiny squeak. "What?""

--Buffy's still the big sister/slayer/mom figure.

BUFFY! Yay-so that's what she was doing *besides meeting Rafael and planning her wedding*-GO Buffy GO!

"Had Buffy been sad to die? Happy that the fight was over? Dawn had never been brave enough to ask.

Buffy smiled weakly at Dawn, but it never reached her eyes. "

--It would hurt too much to know, I think.

OR, it was Jean-Claude (It makes sense, he wants these wretched slayers out of his city)

"I'm missing all the gossip."
--Dawn's life is a soap opera

""Oh, can we go to a steakhouse again and freak out the waiters by ordering a whole cow?" Faith asked. "I always like doing that.""

---DBZ moment? Funny

"I have to be"-Sad!

Loved this chapter! Sister is begging for the computer, so I have to read the epilouge (And the sequal where it Focuses on Buffy and Rafael-cause I don't care about RPIT/or the cop from Angel, but that other story sounds super cool-)

Anyway. Love this story, chapter, everything!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eight: Part Three" from BlameyFomorrii
"Yeah, it did. It made Faith think better of Richard, that he'd thought to tell her the truth, and that he thought she had a right to know. She hadn't had a lot of guys in her life treat her like she was good people. Robin had been the first guy to treat her right, like a lady. It was a good feeling. "

---I usually really don't like Faith, but this was so sweet. I loved her in this story!

Slayers (at least the oldest ones) seem to be very into the Were's (rat, wolf, etc. Richard is a werewolf, right?)

Great chapter!

Aww! Faith and Richard, Buffy and Rafael, And Anita with everyone *Just kidding-but only a little bit*

Loved this chapter!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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