Huh! OK, strange but good...

♥ Love it ♥

Great story, are you planning a sequel or is there one and i missed it. Will be reading more of your fic soon.

Great job!!

thanks. I did at one time plan a part two to this. but it never went anywhere. just basic ideals, nothing more.

This was a great story and I'm glad everything worked out right in the end. ^_^

This was a pretty good story and the fact that its a Max/Xander pairing just makes it even better. Although there were some grammer errors.

I did have beta read, but still some of MY errors still got threw. this was one of my first stories. So I hope the errors are fewer now.

ok one thing i have got to say GOOOOO YOOOOUUUUU!!!!!!
two of my favorite shows i love it well its proberbly one of the best ive seen

this was a good story up until the end. The problem is this: A suitcase nuke would not generate an Emp pulse big enough to knock out LA from Orbit, let alone cause a continental cascade effect. At worst it would knock out the local grid, but not any farther. This is because a suitcase nuke , just because the size constraints, would top off at around 15 kilotons. It would take a major 10 to 20 Megaton nuke to cause the pulse, and even that would probably only affect the west of the rockies.

Willow did teleaport it up. I would think that it was given a mystical boost, Willows magic always had a unexpected edge to it. I image that it added a bit to the the impact, pulse even in the Dark Angel show it was a cascade effect that cause it all. I really didn't go into it plans for a part two that might never get put down. the world recovers fast there. records are not just kept on computes there is always hard copies. some would be lost but not every thing.

You need to reread/edit/re-upload this story as all the 'thoughts' any of the characters have are missing. Reading it is like smoothly riding along and then every so often falling into gaping potholes, very annoying.

re posted the whole story, it should have corrected any problems with it. Thanks for letting me know about the problem.

Great story.

fan-bloody-tastic. Really should be writing an assignment right now but hey, who gives a flying fuck. Fantastic story, really loved what you've done with it and definitely keep up the great work
Cheers
max

I loved this story! I hope you write a sequel.

Please, write a sequel for this one, enjoyed reading this story very much.

Can't wait for either the next chapter or a continuation of this story in series. This has always been my favorite of your's!

VC

Sequil? Please?

with all my other back log? Well I will see what I can do

I loved this story kinda liked how it fit together thanks