TtH • Reviews • Coyote Alpha

Review of chapter "12" from Gideon

Review:

Nice Work. Dawn made a useful contribution here which is unusual in stories like this. I liked it.

Comments from author:

Thanks. Appreciate your commenting, and glad you enjoyed the story.

Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "12" from Ansku

Review:

Good re-telling :)

Comments from author:

Thanks. Have you read the follow-up, "Dressed For Success"?

Review By [Ansku] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "12" from Dragonelf

Review:

Very good story.

::Starts reading the next story in the series::

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The pine stays green in winter...wisdom in hardship.
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Comments from author:

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the story.

Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]

Review of chapter "12" from Aretmis

Review:

Great story.

Comments from author:

Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing and commenting.

Review By [Aretmis] • Date [22 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "12" from TheDon

Review:

awesome story

Comments from author:

Thanks. Appreciate your feedback.

Review By [TheDon] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "12" from GundumM

Review:

i loved it

Comments from author:

Glad to hear that.

Review By [GundumM] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "12" from Nightray

Review:

very cool hope thers a new storry coming affter this one. am thinking hallaween and Dru's aparint refrens to it. Keep up the good works.

Comments from author:

Thanks for reviewing. Check out 'Dressed For Success' for the next story in this 'verse.

Review By [Nightray] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "12" from Obsidian

Review:

Very well written thank you. Your approach was very well thought out and very well done. thanks for that.

Comments from author:

Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate hearing from you.

Review By [Obsidian] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "12" from Rubel

Review:

Cool Story. Well written none of the characters struck me as initially ooc. But like any good story they grew into interesting new people.

Comments from author:

Thanks. Glad to hear you thought I kept everyone in character and that they developed from there. I appreciate hearing from you.

Review By [Rubel] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "12" from LordCorwin

Review:

Just got through re-reading this story again .. and Very well done ....

Comments from author:

Thanks, I appreciate the good words.

Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "12" from AngusH

Review:

Clever and original, I really liked this story.

Comments from author:

Thank you. What do you think of the follow-up, 'Dressed For Success'?

Review By [AngusH] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "12" from Tehan

Review:

That was eight kinds of awesome.

Not sure what that means exactly, but it was the first thing that came to mind after finishing the story. Bonus points for sticking it to the PTB, and even more for recruiting Marcie.

Out of curiousity, was Xander's extra spirit a way of leaving the door open for recruiting someone else to the pack? Or just a way of giving him that little extra to be the Alpha?

Comments from author:

Thanks for reviewing and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it.

The extra spirit was primarily to give the oomph necessary to be Alpha.

Review By [Tehan] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "11" from rudyhenkel

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An excellent penultimate chapter. I love that you gave Angel a good ending. Though Xander is my favorite character, I like Angel as well (which is an apparently unusual combination.) Though, to be honest, I think it would have been better if he hadn't realized that it was his redemption until *after* he threw himself in front of Willow. That way, it would have been clear that he was doing it because it was the right thing to do, and not just because it was an easy out.

Comments from author:

I thought the way that I portrayed it showed that Angel only realized that his redemption was at hand *after* he decided to sacrifice himself to save Willow, the realization hitting him at the same moment he made his choice. In any event, he did make that choice and did save her, which is what really matters.

Review By [rudyhenkel] • Date [3 May 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "7" from rudyhenkel

Review:

Before I continue reading, I want to stop here and thank you, a lot, for writing a decent, Xander-centered story, without making Angel out to be some sort of terrible person. Bravo.

Comments from author:

Thanks for the review. And I wanted to show that Angel did have *some* qualities - he just didn't let them show very much.

Review By [rudyhenkel] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "12" from Bluesnowman

Review:

Awsome story you shold do a sequel.

Comments from author:

Working on it now. ;-)

Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [16 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]