Such potential! Shame to not follow through with it.

I suddenly feel sorry for Ethan when Raiden Gets his hands on him..

Nice. Will there be more added to this?

Possible, i can't say for sure but it is possible.

-Tjin

Great idea. Keep up the good work.

Intertesting.. I hope to see more soon..

please do more chapters.

good story. continue it.

loved this fic :)

was just wandering back through my favorite fics for ideas for new customers when i remembered this one...

it's a brilliant idea, one i might take up myself oneday and attempt, loved the quick referance to 'there can be only one... me' as Chis Lambert as the highlander lol

anyway, one last question... you mentioned a fic called 'Wild Horses' on a review of your's... i'm just wondering if you knew were a updated copy of the fic could be found, or where the fic it primarily posted...

any help finding it would be appreciated :)

M

it can be found on the Xander Zone Archive.

i'll post a link later

-Tjin

Needs to be finished.

Awesome story you should update.

Oh, my. Looks like Ethan is in for a world of hurt. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

the muse is actually working with me right now, the problem is the laptop i write on decided to die.

will try to resurrect and try again.

-Tjin

This chapter is to short but the story is very interesting.

longer chapters will be attempted.

thanks for the review.

-Tjin

cool

dude.

-Tjin

excellent chapter, a little confusing but it's still early in the story and it is also my natural state (being confused that is) so it's all good :)

sorry it's confusing.

will try to iron it out in the next chapter.

-Tjin

Great work on the story, please try to add more chapters soon