Review of chapter "He was my Father, major!" from jujukittychick
just a small thing in this chapter, you list the irish family as McLain at first then it became Mclean, and you had the daughter change into male before they left but then the clan leader married -her-. really interesting idea about the whole atlantes thing (and explains the special talent needed for sg atlantis later lol)
Review By [jujukittychick
] • Date [9 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "author note" from msdarque
How sad and intriguing... I'd very much like to read more. :)
Review By [msdarque
] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from DarkFaerieYumi
I'm sad now. you never updated.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "author note" from race
This was posted four years ago how long is soon?
Comments from author:
When real life will give me 5 minutes to do it !
i apologise to all of you who are waiting for an update,
but i've really been over-booked in the last years
with work, family, trying to find 10 seconds to breathe
and a lot of other things. i've not abandonned the idea of
finishing this story or "between the candle and the wall",
i even have some chapters already writed on paper,
i just can't find the time the type it and post it.
but i will finish them one day.
Review By [race
] • Date [28 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "author note" from kayron
I read a lot of incomplete fanfics, and if I like them I ask if they are going to be completed. I wouldn't take the time to bother, especially in the case of a story that's a few years incomplete, if I didn't think that the story was engaging. In three chapters the reader finds out that Xander is a werehyena, and how he became one. He is aware of the Anita Blake weres and probably vampires too. So he is aware of a supernatural world outside of the hellmouth influence. Buffy, and possibly Giles, don't know about the outside supernatural world. Hence Buffy's slay first and ask questions never reaction to the werehyenas she killed. I was looking forward to the big fight, and necessary big reveal scene by Xander. I was also quite interested in the unique explanation of O'Neil having the Ancient (ATA) gene. He is a the decendant of royal Atlanteans, and Xander (his son) is also. This was probably the part of the series when Jack was put on ice because of the download of alien information in his head, and the military was trying to preserve his life until they could heal him. I would have loved to have seen how the story developed with Xander and his new family dealing with the Stargate, and how the Atlantis part would have developed. There's plenty of plot to work with. Any chance of completion of the story? I'll be tracking...just in case. You never know.
Comments from author:
i know it's been a long long time since i updated this fic, but real life is a b***** and i haven't had anytime to do something fun in a looooooonnnnnngggg time now, but i'll try to finish the story someday, i've a couple of chapters writed on paper but i haven't found the time to type them.
so, i'll try to do the first time i'll a vacation longer than 48h .
Review By [kayron
] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from PsychoWing
Good story so far. I'd like to read more. Quick question though - is Jack actually dead or is there the possibility of a sarcophagus revival in the future (if he really was dead in the first place instead of MIA)?
Review By [PsychoWing
] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "author note" from spring
I love what you have so far. Stating that I must ask if you have forgotten about this wonderful fic because it has been two years since the last update and that was an author's note. Also I have a slight problem why would Buffy attack for no reason the children's parents? Normally she is much less likely to ask like that so what is with the OOC? Please please please update/finish this fic.
Review By [spring
] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from Wolveschildscub
If you need a Beta to chech your writing I would love to do it for you.
I love both this story and "Between the Candle..." and would love to read more.
Hope to talk to you soon,
Review By [Wolveschildscub
] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from redtree
Hey, please update the story, i really think it its a good fanfic.
Review By [redtree
] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from junnights
hello.. the story ın ıtself ıs great... but the fact that you have many errors and exspeccially the dıstance between your sentences ıs REALLY annoyıng. Please get a beta and fıx ıt... Cause I sense that your story ıs good... you should raıse above what you have wrıtten rıght now and make ıt qualıty:)
(... beta or you correctıng ıt.. that ıs up to you.. not even great changes:P but to tell the truth I nearly closed your story when I saw your fırst chapter... The way ıt looks... )
Review By [junnights
] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from astrakage
Please add the next chapter. I want to know more.
Review By [astrakage
] • Date [27 Mar 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from MistieMossflower
This story is off to a great start and is sweet and sad at the same time. I hope that you haven't abandoned it and will update it really really soon. ^_^
Review By [MistieMossflower
] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from ecco
O.O please hurry>.<
this is awesome so far XD
Review By [ecco
] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "author note" from mithrilandtj
So are you updating or not?
Re-edit: It's been over a year since you updated.
Are you gonna finish this story? It was just getting good!
Review By [mithrilandtj
] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "author note" from nightslayer
Well i hope to see an update soon and i'll defintly look up your other stories.
Review By [nightslayer
] • Date [22 Dec 06] • Not Rated