Review of chapter "It's All About the Tension" from Icewolf
Very cute. What's the time frame? Is Willow still in HS during this? It also needs something supernatural going on, even if Willow's just hiding information or making slips about *why* she can't watch SportsNight.
Review By [Icewolf
] • Date [24 Jan 05] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's All About the Tension" from Anonymous Reviewer
Oh!! Dat was cute!!! Dom't know who the other people are other than Willow (Never was into sports). But it was very cute. Don't just leave it at dat. Write more to it. Have Willow and Dan get together. If he's watching soccor now she must have left an empresion. Show how Jeremy reacts to finding out his baby cousin is with Dan. Write more. Loven it!!! *SMILES*
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Mar 03] • Not Rated