Review of chapter "A Lack of Eggnog" from starshinedown
Review:
You just reinforced my fondness for Sam Carter. I think you caught her personality perfectly. I like Riley, too, but it's Sam that caught my attention here. Thanks for the holiday warm fuzzies, albeit several years after you've written it.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
How wonderful. I can see this whole scene as if it was played out on tv in front of me. Wonderful depiction of all the characters.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much. It's always a nice surprise to get feedback on a story that's been out there for a while.
Review By [Demona] • Date [2 Sep 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A trip to California" from raven
Review:
Huh. I love the idea and the pairing and I can see Ainsley applying but for some reason this is missing something. Not sure what, but the execution seems off...
That was touching, fitting for both characters. A very enjoyable, if sad, read.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. When I saw the Riley/Sam Carter pairing this idea just popped into my head. Poor Riley, sitting with the wrong Sam on Christmas Eve. I hope it wasn't too sad. I was going for a happier ending - being with your created family - that sort of vibe.