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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MoonFireStar
Review:
great story thank you finishing it ......you made me cry which is a good thing .!!!!
Review By [MoonFireStar] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from McGuffin
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Hey, not bad. As a whole, it's pretty original. Good job. Good ending. A few laughs, too.

Technically, though, it's pretty badly written. Language and style issues aplenty. Meh dialogue. A couple of instances of confused motivation, and some characterisation iffiness. But the story's good, and that's the important part, right? A good beta could have helped you with the rest. Some capable editing and a couple of rewrites, and this little story could have been awesome.

Mind you, I'm holding you to some pretty high standards, so you shouldn't be crushed by the criticism or anything. You're still better than 90% of all fanfic writers.
Comments from author:
Hey, not bad. As a whole, it's pretty original. Good job. Good ending. A few laughs, too.

Thank you - I'm pleased you think so.

Technically, though, it's pretty badly written. Language and style issues aplenty. Meh dialogue. A couple of instances of confused motivation, and some characterisation iffiness. But the story's good, and that's the important part, right? A good beta could have helped you with the rest. Some capable editing and a couple of rewrites, and this little story could have been awesome.

*chuckles* I admit it could do with some serious editing. It's been quite some time since I wrote this - or indeed anything else up at TTH. I do hope one day to edit some of my older stuff - but finding the time is another matter.

Mind you, I'm holding you to some pretty high standards, so you shouldn't be crushed by the criticism or anything. You're still better than 90% of all fanfic writers.

*smiles* Thank you. This was my first 'proper' effort at writing any fanfic - my standards have gone both up and down since then. I'm very glad you enjoyed it overall and for taking the time to review.

serendu
Review By [McGuffin] • Date [5 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Keshkreature
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Ooh, that was so sweet! I love the whole "full-circle" touch of the baby becoming a slayer. The reason for Faith's delay at being rejoined with Legolas was also excellent. Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
And thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I wrote it a loooong time ago - so I'm pleased that you found it - when I'd forgotten about it myself!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from LadyCarpathian
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AWWW!!! You had me in tears.... I love this one.
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [10 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Wow. I mean...wow.

Yep. That's what I mean. This story calls for a 'wow'.

So...wow.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh... cool, and a happy ending :) made my evening reading that one, thanks for writing it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Of course I want to! Awesome ending! You got them back together with something right out of left field, I'm really glad you had a Buffy/Faith moment in there... *wipes a tear from eye* You have a great grasp of all the characters and setting used in here, you say this was your first fanfic!?! Well it was just super! I hope your muse comes alive soon, I would love to see more from that twisted brain of yours. Thank you for such an entertaining story, I would review each part, but I'm lazy. :P
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [12 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Ok, this is the greatest Lord of the Rings crossover I have ever seen. I tend to avoid them, but when I saw you mention it was the bookverse I had to jump right in! Esp. since you don't have Faith jumping in the story from the start! I hate that! Well very inventive and exciting, I love that Faith isn't effect the main story arc of the Ring... she plays an important part so far but doesn't overshadow Frodo's part, excellent job. Thank you for providing such a great alternative to the usual Mary Sue LoTR x-over most people write, kudos and all that. BTW... if I could I would give it an eleven out of ten!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [12 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Very nice, I like the way you kept it moving and yet didn't try to totally rewrite the ring quest around Faith.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Happy endings all around! Thanks for that. I was wondering if you were going to be able to manage. I should have had more Faith (pun intended). =] I enjoyed the story quite a lot, and look forward to your next creative endevour.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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nice interesting ending.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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ooh, this is good! you've got to finish it! ^.^ hurry!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [14 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I'm loving this story. When I get emails of updates, if this is one of them, it gets read first, no matter what. Love it, love it, love it, can't wait to see how it resolves itself. Hopefully over the course of several chapters, since I don't want it to end. =]
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [26 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "cos you gotta have" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I'm very happy you decided to continue this story. Still liking it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [21 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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