Review of chapter "Part Fourteen" from MarcusSLazarus
After such an intriguing opening for this series, it’s good to see that you plan on continuing it.
While a part of me wishes that you’d explored more of Tara’s thoughts about the differences involved in being with Daniel compared to her other past relationships- even if she loves him, the contrast still has to be a BIT ‘odd’ for her after only being with women before him-, in general the new dynamic works well, to say nothing of the potential offered by the addition of Malita to the equation.
The twist with Tara’s grandmother’s real heritage was a bit of a surprise, but you introduced it in such a manner that it really made sense, and the new take on the nature of Tara’s powers and her connection to Daniel was an excellent way to explore a new aspect of their relationship while still making their bond something only they share rather than just a ‘new’ version of Tara’s ability to share her magic with Willow.
A bit uncertain about Dawn and Jonas, but that’s mainly due to my relative ignorance of Jonas as a character rather than a flaw on your part (I preferred Daniel; what can I say?), and it’s still interesting enough for me to want to see more of that particular plot development as the story continues, each of them finding in the other someone who won’t judge them for who they’re trying to replace or live up to.
Hope you’re going to write another story in this series soon; can’t wait for more!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Fourteen" from jebbypal
Just read this and the first story in the series. Great job! Loved the melding of the two verses.
Review By [jebbypal
] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Fourteen" from RevDorothyL
I'm so grateful you finished this, and I am really hoping for a sequel someday, since somehow I doubt that Dawn and Jonas will stay merely good friends (plus, there seems to be some unfinished business between Faith and Robin, since he had apparently been thinking about her a lot more than he let on, given his efforts to find just the right ring). :)
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Fourteen" from DigiEmissary
It's awesome that you're writing again. I took these updates as an excuse to reread Fine Lines and Shelter, and judging from your note, I now have an excuse to reread Oh For Cryin' Out Loud too. Yay!
These final chapters were a good resolution for the story. I suspect that Jonas Quinn may end up on Faith's team, too...
Review By [DigiEmissary
] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Fourteen" from vladt
very enjoyable read, thank you. looking forward to you returning to this verse.
Review By [vladt
] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from aussiemel
I am really enjoying this story. I am sorry to see that it has not been updated in so long though, I hope you update it one day. It is a truly wonderful story.
Review By [aussiemel
] • Date [15 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from Jonakhensu
This is a wonderful series. I really do hope continue it.
Review By [Jonakhensu
] • Date [22 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from CarmenLindsay
OH MY GOSH!!!!! I am REALLY hoping you finish this story. It is so good!!! If it is encouragement you need, I will give you all that you want!!!!
Review By [CarmenLindsay
] • Date [27 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from SnakeFox
Just finshed reading through this - gotta say, both it and the story before were utterly fantastic. Don't know if you have any plans to finish it, but it'd be a shame it this is all there ever was.
Review By [SnakeFox
] • Date [24 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from DeepBlueJoy
I so hope that you are still around and still interested in this powerful story. I love it and I'm very interested in seeing what happens next with Dawn and Jonas *yah!*, with Tara and Daniel and Malita *of course* and Faith and her new life at the SGC... And do find a spot for Robin. I would love to see a strong black man be an integral part of at least one successful relationship, and I think that Robin has been one of the rocks that have allowed Faith to grow into her new, bright, positive, whole self. I do believe that it may be time for Xander to come home and take over Cleveland. He's smart enough and it's time for him to end exile. And of course there's always Buffy. I really really hate the immortal. I never did like the whole Immortal-Italy story line anyway... But I always liked Spike, but that's another story...
Please do not abandon this story. I beg and plead. I know what it's like to buy a home and move and go through life's small and big miseries. Writing can be a port in life's storms. I hope you'll come back to this one.
Review By [DeepBlueJoy
] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from Dragonelf
I hope that you will get inspired to continue this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot quiche::
Remember tonight... for it is the beginning of always.
- Dante Alighieri
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from dugleikoo
pretty please update
Review By [dugleikoo
] • Date [11 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from purrfus
Tara's heritage is great. I really like how you have continue to develop her character even as you have expanded the number of people involved in the story's action. The Jonas / Dawn set up has been interesting to watch. I didn't like the character on the show because of the way he being there came about, but I've gotten over that, and you have made him fun. The Robin / Faith - I still don't like Robin so her staying at SGC without him would definitely work for me.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from spk
I just discovered your stories about the SGC and was wondering if you ever plan to finish this? I think you are doing a great job. I LOVE the way you are writing Daniel and Tara. I also like the relationship blossoming between Dawn and Jonas. I can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk
] • Date [30 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introduction" from DominoEffect
This is a really really cool fic, and it'd be really really cool if you updated. ^_^
Review By [DominoEffect
] • Date [14 Jan 07] • Not Rated