Shouldn't there be a little more urgency about fixing the Sunnydale problem? Somebody is influencing the slayer, that can't be good. Also... her friends didn't really abandon her, they're under a spell. She might well decide New Orleans is the place she wants to be, but she shouldn't just abandon them. I'm kind of surprised Angel isn't more urgent about all this, too. That said, until Willow can break the memory spell I suppose there's not much she can do. Hm. In the rare event that her parents return to Sunnydale, will they notice she's not around anymore? Heh.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
I'm always happy to see an update from you as I enjoy your work so much.
It's nice to see Willow starting to settle into New Orleans, finding a niche for herself.
I do wonder who is playing "Amy" in Sunnydale? Tara maybe? Some other big bad trying to bring down the slayer from inside? Someone is being naughty either way. It's nice that Wesley and the AI gang are willing to help her.
I look forward to more of your stories as always. (If you're trying to decide which fic to update next, I vote for either Pale Serpents or Family Tree Series, part 2.) Take care!
I was just re-reading this and noticed a discontinuity... Willow is talking about Amy as still being a rat, but didn't she un-rat Amy a few chapters ago?
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [9 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Loving this so far! The whole "rat-Amy" thing confused me at first, then noticed the next chapter. Yep, I'm a bit silly. Really love the portrayal of Remy, and especially your bowdlerizing of canon. :)
Review By [Ryutana] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Considering Needs" from Dragonelf
Review:
Excellent job
::Gives the plot bunny a serving of Mohnnudel::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Considering Needs" from azulkan
Review:
Great chapter, great fic. Glad to see the update. Looking forward to more.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very nice. I like how they are trading favors. Things are more equal that way.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Signs and Worries" from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done a great job with this and the 2 previous chapters.
I don't know why I get the feeling that rat in the cage really is Amy and the unratted version of Amy who is in Sunnydale is your version of the Key.
::Gives the plot bunny some Apple strudel::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
