Xander you idiot! That's The Bride! She'll cut your hand off for saying that!
Man,that was totally awesome! Please keep it up!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Season of Giving" from amusewithaview
Review:
Gee, considering that one truck driver... that MIGHT not have been the best way to start a conversation with our second-favorite coma victim. Hope she listens to him before she hands him his windpipe on an intestine platter.
Danke
Comments from author:
you might want to read the other submission where I added a chapter after this one. lol
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Considering that most of her 'visitors' in the hospital were aranged by Buck and what those visitors were doing with her, that might not have been his best choice for an opening line.
Comments from author:
True... but then there's the case that I doubt any of them would have stuck their hand out..... it's easy to break it if you know how too.