Nice. I'm impressed.

... Would asking for more be asking for too much?

interesting concept. Nice. I like it. Hope it's continued at some point.

I loved this! Riddick's voice is perfectly in character, and it just perks the interest right up; why is Buffy on a prisong shuttle (so it seems).


Very interesting.

Wow. You nailed Riddick dead on the money. I never would have thought of this pairing, but now that I'm reading this it really works. They're two of a kind.

I love this. Riddick is one of the coolest characters ever created, I think, and that he finds a kindred in Buffy...very nice.

Wow. Wow. Wow. I'm so glad to see more Buffy/PB crossovers. This piece is just absolutely wonderful. You have Riddick's reaction to finding Buffy spot on. It makes me kinda shudder to think that Buffy has been caged in cyro for as long as she has. Evil goverment. And it also makes me wonder exactly how she got there in the first place. Wonderful. By the end you just have so many questions in your head, and you want all the answers, but you write enough to tease us, give us what we want, but not necessarily what we fully need. Beautiful.

I'd never thought a Pitchblack/Buffy crossover could work, but your story convinced me of the opposite. It was really great how you managed to keep Riddick in character.

Loved it. Riddick is awesome. It would be fabulous if you extended this. It has tons of potential to be a story.

This is fabulous!!!! Must Have More!!!!

Great teaser...I love the lead in...I'm always I fan of good character writing and even though you didnt get into Buffy's side that much Riddicks was so totally him. Although the sheer fact that she refused to die like the rest may in itself be a character trait. For such a short piece it pulls the mind towards so many possibilities. I would love to read more, even though the teaser alone is almost satisfying enough. Great writing.

This is spot on for Riddick. You managed to have his voice down pat. "Smelled something beautiful" indeed.
I'll just join the masses and hope you'll continue this some day.

Thank you for sharing.

sweet

Oh no you don't, 'Fin' indeed. You can't just leave us hanging here. At least do a follow up from Buffy's POV.

That's only fair don't you think.

Oh come on, that's a great set-up! Don't end it there. When does this happen in the Riddick universe? After Riddick becomeing king of the Necros? After Pitch Black?

In a game of who's the better killer would Riddick beat Buffy?

This is a beautifully written piece and it's left me wanting more but also works well just as it is.