I don't get the rain coat thing. but the rest was really good.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. The raincoat was a reference to the "Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered" episode where Buffy shows up at the library to seduce Xander wearing only a black raincoat and matching high heels. ;-)
Review of chapter "Be All you Can Be" from CPTSkip
Review:
Now this story was something totally different. Very funny and sort of sweet. But I really wish you'd work on some of your other really neat stories. *hint, hint* Lol!
Comments from author:
I'm currently working on the next chapter of 'Who Are You', but it's taking some time since I can't seem to get the conversations and comments to sound natural, at least to my ears. I'm also working on several others, including one story I haven’t posted here, yet. It's a very dark story, and is *very* NC-17 in places, as well as ‘Coyote Alpha’ and maybe “Forever And A Day’ after that..
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Dec 04] • Not Rated
funniest story I've read in years.one drawback though what are they gonna do for christmas and Xander's birthday?lol.athough with that many Xander's around buying twinkies hostess should be out of bankruptcy in no time. great story looking forward to more of your work.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. I'm sure Xander(s) glad he/they can help the economy. ;-)
Review By [war] • Date [11 Dec 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]