Glad you stopped writing this. Xander has only fucked Faith... turns in to a vampire with mild mind control and a bite thats orgasmic but hasn't fucked anyone else and is now being thrown into a relationship with Faith again..... the usual sexless Xander story.

I hope you get inspired to add more chapters to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad::

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a very well written and enjoyable story please continue it if you can. It seems so cool and right for them. Thank you for posting it.

I like this one. I just think that Xander would have been a great Gangrel. He is a great character to crossover into the WoDM.

It was either Gangrel or Brujah, I went with Brujah because he is SO not a loner type, always wanting to be with the gang and feeling lost and listless when they went to college. I know that those stereotypes can be written up differently, but I have a reason for the Brujah embrace that will be coming up soon.

I've had a notion like this kicking around in my head too, so kudos for doing it!

And poor Buffy. I know what happened to her. ::shudder:: Or a general idea, at any rate.

Not sure about the torpor from simply running on empty, tho'. From what I can recall, that's just a woefully penalized self-control check, but I'm used to live action rules. Still, perfectly fine if you're only telling the tale mostly from what Xander sees and does. He got off easy with six months.

More to come in a private review. I have notions to offer.

This is one hell of a story Willow. I hope you continue it.

Interesting concept and the first five chapters were great but chapter 6 seemed off. The moment it mentioned the six month coma it felt like you were trying to cut the fic off early and maybe it's because you didn't get much farther than that but even after I saw the tbc it felt kinda hollow.

This is fantastic!!! Can't wait for more!

Wispr

So happy to see an update. More soon please!

Good work.

Damn! Hardcore ending here, man.

Just stumbled over this story and have to say that I'm definitely looking forward to seeing Xander open the gates of Hell a bit on the creatures that hurt one of his girls. I guess it's a good thing that the Sunnydale Armory doesn't hold any nuclear weapons, isn't it? ;-)

Hope to see another chapter soon.

I'm lost. Did they turn Buffy?

Um...no. They did something much, much worse to her. It will be revealed later, if not in a flashback than in exposition.

i like the story. i just hope you update more often now.

WOW! This was great! I can't decide if this or A Knight's Journey is my favorite of yours.

nice