Nice fic. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.

very well told tale. thank you for the fine read.

Hmm, very interesting take on the Slayer Mythos. I like. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Aw... is there going to be a sequel?

Great fic :)

Great story! I just voted for it in COA2009/8! Hope you win!

wow thanks =D

I hadn't checked back in a while, but I was so very glad to see it updated. I had worried. And I'd stay, flinging about compliments and charming things, but I was very excited to find that there's more in the series, and so, cn't linger in the reviewing. :)

lol I'm glad you found it again, it did take me forever to get this out, but its always nice to find that people who come back to it still enjoy it =D

I almost missed the resolution to the meeting of the Slayer versus Broadsword and I picked up
the story through "Choices".Having the complete through line of the story is a treat to read.
I loved it and "Choices" a worthy followup in a multi chapter narrative.

Choices would probably be a little confusing without this I suppose? Hopefully it all makes more sense now. I hope to be continuing with Choices soon.

I'm so glad you continued this. Stuck at the end of the club scene for so long.

Great story! I'm a little sad she had to leave Faith behind. i think Faith being with her on her journey could have been a good thing. Helped her keep some sort of control. I can't wait to read the rest to this story :)

I think you've managed to end this story at a perfect place and in all honesty, the entire story seemed quite well paced too. The idea that the Scoobies were aware all along is very sad, and Buffy's interaction with Faith was touching and bittersweet. Its a great place to end this part of the story. The uncertainty ahead and Buffy's need to learn more about herself and her new gifts seems perfect beginning for the sequel. The problem is, is that now, some of us are dying to find out whats in store for our Immortal Slayer.

Thanks for sharing.

Dont worry... all I have to do is go over the first chapters phrasing and formatting. As I said we're getting onto some original bits that were written 3 years ago... I'm kinda worried there's going to be some crazy jumping around in styles of writing.

I love the story, especially how Buffy gets more powerful. I also like how she now knows more languages and demons than Giles because they always made her seem like a dumb blonde in the show. She couldn't have been as successful as she was if she was really that stupid. I also like how she thinks of herself more instead of trying to please her lousy friends and whiny sister. It made me sad that just when Buffy and Faith are finally getting along, that Buffy had to leave. I hope to see more of their relationship in the sequel and I hope you post it soon. I also hope that it crosses over with Highlander more and that Buffy actually learns and participates in the Game. All in all, good job.

I love the story, especially how Buffy gets more powerful. I also like how she now knows more languages and demons than Giles because they always made her seem like a dumb blonde in the show. She couldn't have been as successful as she was if she was really that stupid. I also like how she thinks of herself more instead of trying to please her lousy friends and whiny sister. It made me sad that just when Buffy and Faith are finally getting along, that Buffy had to leave. I hope to see more of their relationship in the sequel and I hope you post it soon. I also hope that it crosses over with highlander more and that Buffy actually learns and participates in the Game. All in all, good job.

excellent ending, really loved the buffy/faith stuff, hope to see more of it in the next story...liked that dawn understood, as much as she could, and that the other scoobies let her go w/o argument...though i wasn't sure if they truly understood, and i kinda hope they didn't, because they never seemed to want to understand her as long as she acted the way they deemed fit. hope to see buffy dealing w/ their betrayal more in the next story, and maybe actually have them apologize, or something, to show they understand what the betrayal did to her. i'm so excited that i'm off to check out the next story!

Very enjoyable story. I particularly liked the way you show how Buffy was changed by the additional slayer power. Very original. I look forward to reading the sequal. Thanks much for writing this story.