Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from andystreetuk
wow, Albus is dark, I didn't see that one coming :)
Review By [andystreetuk
] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from twlight
I love this wonderful story. I can tell how you have grown as a writer by reading this story and Four square go you. I do however hope that you finish this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
I don't know. If I finish it, I'll have to rewrite it. I kinda hate the way it is now. I've also lost all the files with that story. They were on a flash drive that got stepped on. I'm glad you like my stories.
Review By [twlight
] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Winterhart
I love this fic can't wait for more
Review By [Winterhart
] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from spring
This fic is a little confusing however I do love it. The reason that I feel that it is confusing is because I don't know what happened before the Scoobies and 1/3 of the Charmed Ones needed to come to Hogwarts to heal. Did you write a prequel to this, also are you planing on finishing this wonderful fic. Again I love this fic.
Review By [spring
] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from InchPrincess
i am incredibly cross with you.
ive read this story before on ff.net and although i didnt recognize it at first i knew quite early on that this had been one of my favorite fics some time ago and then i realized that i had found it again i was really excited until i realized that the last time you update it was 2004. i was 13! now i understand how hard it is to go back to a story you havent written in some time but i really really hope you write at least a bit more because you really had something great with this fic. the plot the character integration, the mystique. please update it. or maybe start writing something similar again
Comments from author:
I had actually completely forgott about this satory, after my drive got wiped.
Yeah, all of my stories has been on a flash drive, and the drive got broken in half, and everything was lost. A good 2/3 of my stories got scrapped after that, because I just didn't have the patience to go back to the archive sites, copy everything, paste it into word, and start over again with the new chapters. I may get back to this one eventually, but I may not. Honestly, after that many years, it comes that I change my opinions, or views. In this case, I started writing that story before the 6th book even came out, and now the second one comes out in 2 weeks. I think there might be one chapter more on another site.
I'm also thinking of reworking the story just as A BtVS/AtS/HP crossover, and completely taking out the Charmed parts, since they don't really do much for the story.
Review By [InchPrincess
] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from KieriToews
Oh I really like this story! It's a crying shame that you haven't continued with it. It's excellent.
Review By [KieriToews
] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from banner
... and up is down and black is white and ...
This story shakes up my worldview. It takes everything and turns it upside down. Wow.
Review By [banner
] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from BrokenSunrise
Wow, I read your other reviews and noticed how harsh some of it was. It's really pretty good and I cant see why people would act so rude when if they really think it's so bad they should be giving some constructive critisism. Anyway, Spike is really great here. Sometimes his 'wisdom' seems a little bit unspike and forced, but after season 7 nobody really knows how much he could have changed(inless of corse your using angel). But besides Spike and Amy sometimes.( I dont really understand how she would be good and with Willow now, but hey if you the few ep's that had her being so vindictive to will than I can kinda see how you get there. And she is written well.) It's a really great fic. Bye the bye Ethen is really great in here too.
Review By [BrokenSunrise
] • Date [28 Dec 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from raven
This fic seems a bit chaotic and forced. While I am somewhat bothered by so many inter-relations, the rampant OC and OOC throughout the story is even more troubling. Why should Dumbledore bother to sort Dawn in his office if Spike was going to mouth off with her identity less than an hour later? And in such a public area? Telling close relatives who have to know are one thing. But this is a secret that is not told to most of the Scoobies until they HAD to know in canon. But suddenly its getting to told to strangers in the most public setting in Hogwarts?
If they had time to get Dawn's wand, why were robes and school supplies not purchased as well?
If Willow is a Weasley, why didn't any of the Weasley's know what was going on with her? Or even that she was coming to England again? Why are you breaking up the Charmed ones? Leo can teach Paige to use her whitelighter powers just as easily as Hogwarts...
Torture isn't Spike's forte? Since when? He got his name from his use of railroad spike's...all indication in canon are that he can be a right bastard when needed, especially when someone threatens what's his. And him leaving a woman pregnant? Canon William is a bit of a romantic, sensitive boy. Very devoted to his mother and other interests. I cannot see him sleeping with someone then leaving her. Even making the ancestor Cecily doesn't make sense. He just wasn't the type. And since vamps aren't supposed to make children...
All this slash...good lord. One or two makes sense (Ethan/Giles has always been hinted at for one) and something between Amy, Xander and Willow can be worked, romantically or not. But Angel and Wesley? Since when? And what about the curse?
If only Dawn was sorted, then how is Spike going between all the rooms? One big suite connected to Gryffindor now that Dawn is one? A short cut between their guest tower and the common room? Doesn't this just single out Dawn even further?
Spike going off on Snape in class? Ok...but not noticing Harry's damage? The smell would be stronger earlier on and with you placing them so closely together so often, he should have noticed earlier...certainly in less than 6 days...
Good call on Angel and Spike enjoying a bit of fun together, seasons 2 and 3 in particular highlighted their love of mutual torture and one-upmanship. But why didn't they shower before going to Hogwarts? And how did they get to Hogwarts without a whitelighter, floo access, or other magical means?
What's the point of Dumbledore being evil? Voldie and Dumbledore both rotten and manipulating the Wizarding World in tandem or fighting over ownership? I would think that a Dark Wizard would have been spotted after 50 years, especially with how closely Dumblefore is watched...if nothing else he isn't a Dark Wizard who wants power...idiot keeps turning it down to play with the pawns...
Cellphones do not work at Hogwarts-rule of electronics in a high magic zone...
If the Malfoy's, Weasley's, Black's and Longbottom's are all part other species, what about the other old families? The Dumbledore's, Potter's, Snape's, etc.? Shouldn't the vamps sense or smell something?
Interesting loops, but far too many fandom cliche's. Willow and Ron at least knowing each other, if not being related are needed. But Spike being Harry's great-great-grandfather seems a bit out of it. Can't he just be a great-great-uncle? That would get around the OC conotations in that B line...adding Wesley to the family is also out of sorts, makes Angel, Wesley, Spike and Harry all related several times over...rather incestuous...And everyone spilling all the hard-protected secrets? Why?
Review By [raven
] • Date [17 Dec 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Requiescere" from JoeHundredaire
It just seems to be one cliched bit after another sewn together. Not only is Spike suddenly alive again, but we've got Ron and Willow related... everyone spilling their guts every which way... Dawn becomes the obligatory Gryffindor to get in with the Golden Trio, and Spike (which is totally unbelievable for me) spills her secret, in public no less... Spike being related to the Evans family rather than the Malfoys is new, but still based upon the cliched notion that all sorts of people are interrelated... and the very first mention of Draco involves him being smitten with Dawn, who he's never talked to, never gotten a close look at, or anything? What the hell is that?
Review By [JoeHundredaire
] • Date [16 Dec 04] • Not Rated