Review of chapter "Not My Fault!" from
CPTSkipReview:
OK, so far your story has captured my interest. Please write more.
Review By [
CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not My Fault!" from
BanditcatReview:
Intriguing start. Would like to see where you take this.
Review By [
Banditcat] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Ordinary Day" from
QueensarrowReview:
Nice introduction! Are you going to keep the same narrative voice through out the whole story? 'Cause that would be cool.
Review By [
Queensarrow] • Date [18 Dec 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Ordinary Day" from
LisaFReview:
I don't think this is a lousy beginning chapter, but it's so short that it's hard to review. You seem to have spelling, grammar, and puncuation down pat, and that's a really great enticement to read further. I do look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [
LisaF] • Date [17 Dec 04] • Not Rated
