Wow, this is really god! Dark, but good! I'm kinda curious as to who hurt Dawn, though. And what happened to the Gang? Wouldn't they be looking for her? Unless something happened and they're dead. And what about Spike? He was all Protector Guy with Dawn in Season 5. Please, please, please say you plan on continuing this! More soon, please?
~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
My god that story was very very emotional. What do you thinks caused the memory loss, and just what sort of massochistic bastard would do that sort of a thing to a person. I mean jesus, thats awful. I hope you update and get to the retribution and revenge part, because I'm really and I mean really looking forward to that Cheers max
Oh boy. This is a great, emotional story. Please continue. Because Jack has to find whoever did this. I like that Dawn can sense the 'off' things. And very good of T to know when to tell the truth with Dawn. And, gawd,... the Charlie's catcher's mitt thing had me tearing up. I haven't read such emotionally charged fanfic in a good long while. Write more, you must.
Review By [penguinsinlove] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Any chance of getting more chapters on this story? You've got a fascinating beginning, and it's interesting to see a BtVS/Stargate crossover where there is knowledge of the Initiative on the SG-1 side of the equation. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
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