This is a wonderful fic so far. I do have to ask though why you haven't finished or updated this wonderful fic in well over two years. I only spotted a few grammar and or spelling errors in this whole fic. Please please consider finishing this wonderful fic, you did after all take the time to make pic's for it so you must have put a lot of thought and work into the story and it seems a shame for this to not be completed. I think it would be really cool to see how Professor Snapes' relationship with Willow shocks the other students as he is actually kind to her and he is the exact opposite to almost everyone else. Again I love this wonderful fic please update this again.
Lovely story, i hope your going to update one day. Love they way you write Willow and Sev, even the way you write the changing Draco. Can't wait to see how this develops.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I think I may rewrite this though. But I definitely plan to continue this.
Review By [flyawayblue] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow, 13 chapters already, i was disappointed when i reached the end. I like the way you write willow, i was impressed when you wrote her having difficulty initially as so many writers tend to make her good at everything from the start. can't wait to see how the other Gryffindors are going to act when Snape isn't intentionally cruel to her like he is the rest of the house..or how willow reacts when he is....teehee..it'll be fun to watch the interaction which ever direction you take it. I hope she pairs up with Neville in potions..that poor boy needs someone to help keep Snape off his back. That is who she sat down next to, right? How are things in sunny hell? Is the Scooby gang going to make an occasional appearance or are you gonna just make it focused on Hogwarts? They should owl at least. :D
Woo-hoo! I love updates! Nice movement for this chapter. It'll be fun to see the Gryffindors' reactions when Snape tries to maintain a relationship. I have an idea of Willow's reaction to them, can't wait to see how you do it, though. I like how you've got Draco running for the hills and Snape digging in to fight for her well-being and the Gryffindor males drooling. It'll make for some entertaining interaction later.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [21 Jun 06] • Not Rated
love this story, it has so much potentional. Willow/Draco & Willow/Harry are my two of my favorite pairings & this is 2 for the price of 1,. now that the term has started, i have high hopes for a jelous Draco until he gets over himself as Willow is welcomed by the griffyndors & HArry in particular. can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [morgannia] • Date [21 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Thanks for the update to one of my favorite stories. This chapter was very good, I could almost feel her uncomfortableness (is that a word?) But any-who, great job and I look forward to more updates soon..hint..hint.
Review By [Erica] • Date [29 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Oooohh! I like how you're building the story here. Watching Draco in earlier chapters, you can see something like this was coming. Be fun to watch him turn purple when Willow moves on... Can't wait to read it.
Comments from author:
Yep there was no mystery there. It was pretty obvious. But the the fun really starts when Draco realizes what a huge mistake he made.
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