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Review of chapter "ch 20" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
"Wow this one was a long time ago and if I recall correctly the second long story that I finished though it was the first one that I started and finished. I was writing this one when I was studying for my GED and now I'm studying for my MAT.

I'm glad that you think my writing evolved as I stopped about halfway through it and did my Family Reunion fic.

*****

You started it 2004 thru 2006, then in March 2010 you continued it. The pre-GED period _really_ shows, tho the later 2006 ones were already visibly getting better.

I suspect that if you read the early ones you will whince.
Comments from author:
Almost afraid to.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch21" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
I noticed that your writing skills (spelling, sentence structure, grammar and punctuation) developed over the years. The first 20 or chapters were very annoying and distracting with lack of commas, run on sentences, etc.

The latter ones were vastly easier to read.

Wondering what kind of dreams and other odd aftereffects of the merge the "Bats" had that night. grin
Comments from author:
Wow this one was a long time ago and if I recall correctly the second long story that I finished though it was the first one that I started and finished. I was writing this one when I was studying for my GED and now I'm studying for my MAT.

I'm glad that you think my writing evolved as I stopped about halfway through it and did my Family Reunion fic.

Man I've been doing this a while.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [1 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "LAst Chapter" from Kindleflame
Review:
How come you never answered my question? Were you mad or something? You responded to other readers questions most of the time. I don't think my question was to difficult. What type of writer are you if you blow off readers who take the time to review? Not a very good one in my opinion.
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "LAst Chapter" from Kindleflame
Review:
Wonderful story! You have talent in spades! I had one question if you kindly have the time. Did Batman and his friends ever learn the true identities of the Scobbies and vice versa? I was most curious about that. Please let me know if you can. Thanks and take care. :D
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "LAst Chapter" from bradsan
Review:
very good story. Love it .

Only one thing though. When Angel told Buffy LA was his city Buffy backed off not because he told her that but because she was hurt and had enough of everything. So she left him with LA he wanted it so he could get it and be happy with it.

The Slayer isn't bounded to one city. All the other Slayers before Buffy traveled around the world they have to protect the whole world. Because Buffy had family and friends she protected the Hellmouth and because of the prophecies of course. Kendra traveled all around the world and Faith started in Boston before she ran away to Sunnydale.

Batman claimed this city and doing a good job why argue if he is doing a good job protecting it. Saves them a lot of work. When necessary the new Council will do anything to prevent harm even when batman won't cooperate but how they handle it now that won't be necessary.

Glad you wrote this story it is really good. Thank you for sharing.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it let me tell you it was one heck of a trick to write at the time.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [8 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "LAst Chapter" from Blackett
Review:
nice closing!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [25 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "LAst Chapter" from FireWolfe
Review:
Any chance of a Sequwl? Pretty Please.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [24 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from Blackett
Review:
Great story. Any chance to see more of it?


Edit: I think it will be worth the waiting.
Comments from author:
Tring to find a way to finish it off but the muse is being silent.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [22 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
A bit confused about where the twist of Buffy owning a hotel in Gotham came into play, and you could space your paragraphs out more- they’re a bit hard to read crammed together like they are in some chapters-, but the Tim/Dawn idea has definitely potential, and the finale with the enjoining spell using Buffy, Angel AND Batman as the ‘Hands’ was DEFINITELY an interesting concept (To say nothing of the alliance between Two-Face and Ethan; might have been brief, but it had potential as a concept if nothing else).
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 26" from firedrakegirl
Review:
This is awesome! I really love it! It does have a lot of grammatical and sentence structure mistakes, but it is a great story.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from LostDragon
Review:
The enjoining spell!?!?

I did not see that one coming,

great story you have going here I am not a usual fan of Batman/Buffy x-overs howeverI have got to say great job.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from grd
Review:
Incredible battle! Well done. Eager to see what happens next.
Review By [grd] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 26" from FireWolfe
Review:
Well Ethan will certainly liven things up as well as Ripper. Personally I hope Ripper kicks batman's ass for being such a damned control freak and asshole. Buffy and company have been way to nice and patient with him and the bat clan. Their supeior bullshit attitudes is going to get someone hurt or killed. Seriously the bats a criminal as much as Faith ever was. He just hides better and does not own it. Anyway well done more when you can.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 26" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story.

Please update early and ***MUCH MORE*** often!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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