Review of chapter "Darkness" from dulcinea
This was an interesting glimpse at Faith's character and the pairing works well. I just had two little points. First, the bit with the demon and the amulet and how that fits into everything else could be a bit clearer. Second, site rules are that every story needs a disclaimer, so you might want to add one.
Review By [dulcinea
] • Date [15 May 05] • Not Rated