Review of chapter "18" from tchizek
Great concept, good execution, a bit rocky with the proof reading but it only minimally detracted from my enjoyment of the story.
I do wish there was a sequel!
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from trudy
I really enjoyed the story but it definitely needs to be proof read, there are a lot of errors that ruin the flow of the story.
Review By [trudy
] • Date [20 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Elissiaro
This was really good. :)
Review By [Elissiaro
] • Date [28 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from jujukittychick
very cool story, gotta love how xander always winds up right in the middle of things lol. loved the intereactions between everyone and xander taking care of leale like she was another one of his girls. very well done!
Review By [jujukittychick
] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from serenityselena
well ...this sure was an interesting twist to the original plots ....
awesome story ...
Xander was fabulous ^_^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18" from jcon
Hey just found this. Good story, good plot. Xander is well written & great to read the other characters being fleshed out so well.
Review By [jcon
] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from LordSia
Awesome. Still, lots of unexplored potential with mystic wards on the Stargate. Imagine all aliens unable to come through unless specifically invited! Muahahahahaha!
A bit short, could be expanded upon, but there were no major grammar or language errors. Could use a bit more fleshing out (descriptions of characters, mannerisms, surroundings, etc), but all in all, great job.
Review By [LordSia
] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Obsidian
Good story. Thanks
Review By [Obsidian
] • Date [27 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18" from Morgomir
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir
] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demonchasers" from banner
A terrific story and a nicely satisfying ending. I especially approve of the way you didn't have a Hollywood-type deus ex machina swooping in to fix everything. Well done, and thank you.
Review By [banner
] • Date [25 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18" from Scrappychic
What a wonderful story. Thank you for telling it.
Review By [Scrappychic
] • Date [7 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18" from Ansku
Good one :)
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Elleria
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [25 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from LordMesron
Great story! I'm glad you finally finished it. I always enjoy a Xander story where he gets to show what he knows while still being himself. Any thoughts on a sequel of some sort?
Review By [LordMesron
] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Duskie
This was a great story. I love the shopping in this chapter. Of coarse to a slayer going to a whole new world the exciting part would be the whole new shopping malls, and accessibility to fashion.
Review By [Duskie
] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]