very cool story, gotta love how xander always winds up right in the middle of things lol. loved the intereactions between everyone and xander taking care of leale like she was another one of his girls. very well done!
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Awesome. Still, lots of unexplored potential with mystic wards on the Stargate. Imagine all aliens unable to come through unless specifically invited! Muahahahahaha! A bit short, could be expanded upon, but there were no major grammar or language errors. Could use a bit more fleshing out (descriptions of characters, mannerisms, surroundings, etc), but all in all, great job.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
A terrific story and a nicely satisfying ending. I especially approve of the way you didn't have a Hollywood-type deus ex machina swooping in to fix everything. Well done, and thank you.
Great story! I'm glad you finally finished it. I always enjoy a Xander story where he gets to show what he knows while still being himself. Any thoughts on a sequel of some sort?
Review By [LordMesron] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This was a great story. I love the shopping in this chapter. Of coarse to a slayer going to a whole new world the exciting part would be the whole new shopping malls, and accessibility to fashion.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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