Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

The Moon

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Evil Genius & Psycho Stalkers" from DragonBard
Review:
Doesn't explain Jessie becoming a monster like other vampires.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Obsidian
Review:
Great story. I think I've read it before, it was just as good this time around. Thanks.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Elleria
Review:
Is good. Going to read the next bit now.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Vilkath
Review:
Not bad idea and all, though I think most Anita Blake cross overs sort fail in the 'every where but Sunnydale vampires are okay and legal' crap. The Watchers, Slayer etc wouldn't really exist in such a world as they are nor with they have such outdated information. Not mention unless people forget people have fought vampires outside of Sunnydale, Buffy in her original school, Kendra in Jamaica, Faith in Boston etc. Sure it's easy to say Xander was just isolated but it totally ignores the rest the cast.

That aside it's a nice story and all and i love the female pack Xander has thus far. The first person summary mode is a little disappointing. Things just described in a blah way like a history book most the time, nearly nothing happens in 'real time' which is a shame I feel the story would be a million times better if it did. As they say 'Show us what happens don't tell us what happened.'
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from starfire
Review:
Please ohh please tell me your gonna do a sequal..cause i can so see one comeing. and i'd probably be the first one to read it lol.
Review By [starfire] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Loatroll
Review:
Very interesting ending there :-) Any hope for a sequel?
Great stuff no matter what you do in the future.
Thanks for the great read.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from APS
Review:
My thought about the story as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [17 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from RavynJensen
Review:
Great fic, I love Xander-IS-a-capable-person fics. I can't wait for the sequel!
Review By [RavynJensen] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Hyena's Sure Cause Trouble" from purrfus
Review:
I know I have read this story before, and yet no reviews. Bad me.

I really like the change, and the slow gradual power evolution.

I was thinking the exposition kinda rushed through, but since I really wanted to get out of SunnyD it works.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Ansku
Review:
Nice :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from SlysDragonAngel
Review:
Yes!! I like Faith when she's not being so dark but just a bad ass girl. Is there going to be a sequel??? please???? This story is just too good. And that last comment has got to mean SOMETHING??? Right?? ^_^ I love it anyways sequel or no sequel. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Yes a sequel is slowly in the works. The problem is I am suffering from writers block to the 10th degree. Since I won't put it up until its done who almost done you are in for a wait. Sorry its taking so long. But know that the sequel is in progress. It just isn't going as fast as I would like.
Review By [SlysDragonAngel] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awesome story please please oh please continue this story into a series.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Evil Genius & Psycho Stalkers" from LordCorwin
Review:
Very Well Done ... I would hope you make another sequel to this....
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm working on the sequel but its very slow going and I don't like to post unless I have a story almost complete. I hate leaving something unfinished.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [27 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from JediKnight
Review:
Great story, I hope you will make a sequel.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Page: 1 of 4 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking