Great story. I think I've read it before, it was just as good this time around. Thanks.

Is good. Going to read the next bit now.

Not bad idea and all, though I think most Anita Blake cross overs sort fail in the 'every where but Sunnydale vampires are okay and legal' crap. The Watchers, Slayer etc wouldn't really exist in such a world as they are nor with they have such outdated information. Not mention unless people forget people have fought vampires outside of Sunnydale, Buffy in her original school, Kendra in Jamaica, Faith in Boston etc. Sure it's easy to say Xander was just isolated but it totally ignores the rest the cast.

That aside it's a nice story and all and i love the female pack Xander has thus far. The first person summary mode is a little disappointing. Things just described in a blah way like a history book most the time, nearly nothing happens in 'real time' which is a shame I feel the story would be a million times better if it did. As they say 'Show us what happens don't tell us what happened.'

nice

Please ohh please tell me your gonna do a sequal..cause i can so see one comeing. and i'd probably be the first one to read it lol.

Very interesting ending there :-) Any hope for a sequel?
Great stuff no matter what you do in the future.
Thanks for the great read.

My thought about the story as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.

Great fic, I love Xander-IS-a-capable-person fics. I can't wait for the sequel!

I know I have read this story before, and yet no reviews. Bad me.

I really like the change, and the slow gradual power evolution.

I was thinking the exposition kinda rushed through, but since I really wanted to get out of SunnyD it works.

Nice :)

Yes!! I like Faith when she's not being so dark but just a bad ass girl. Is there going to be a sequel??? please???? This story is just too good. And that last comment has got to mean SOMETHING??? Right?? ^_^ I love it anyways sequel or no sequel. Keep up the good work.

Yes a sequel is slowly in the works. The problem is I am suffering from writers block to the 10th degree. Since I won't put it up until its done who almost done you are in for a wait. Sorry its taking so long. But know that the sequel is in progress. It just isn't going as fast as I would like.

Awesome story please please oh please continue this story into a series.

Very Well Done ... I would hope you make another sequel to this....

Thank you. I'm working on the sequel but its very slow going and I don't like to post unless I have a story almost complete. I hate leaving something unfinished.

Great story, I hope you will make a sequel.

Very nice story. I was really enjoying it ... until the end of chapter 7... Then you left me hanging with a limmerick on the wall of Drusilla's HQ and an epilogue that puts everyone back in Sunnydale... What happened in St. Louis? What happened to Drusilla? What happened to the rest of the story?

Yeah I know it was was an abrupt ending; but this is Xander retelling the story to an unconscious Faith. Of course he won't tell her everything. He never tells anyone everything. I am working on a sequel but until I get it almost finished I won't be posting it. The problem right now is that I've hit a mental roadblock and haven't been able to write anything for months.