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I lie inside myself

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Review of chapter "I lie inside myself" from spring
Review:
Okay shouldn't eather Giles or the Headmaster (can't spell his name) asked for more info about Dawn's nightmare? I love this fic so far PLEASE please upddate/finish this fic.
Comments from author:
hmm never thought about that probably should have
Review By [spring] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I lie inside myself" from wickedness
Review:
can you update... soon, please?
Comments from author:
I will try as soon as i can i had most of the next chappy written and my computer crashed and i lost some of it but i will try to rewrite it soon so be patient
Review By [wickedness] • Date [1 Jun 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I lie inside myself" from BuffyFanForLife
Review:
Awesome!! This story is really cool, yoi should update, soon.

SuziQ
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you like my story i really liked writting this chapter and hope to have another chapter up soon well please keep reading and dont forget to check out my other storys

have a good day

WeasleysAngel
Review By [BuffyFanForLife] • Date [10 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I lie inside myself" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay, hun... this story gets rated "e" for needed editing, and a "e" needs to make rags or cloths into clothes, or tailored fabric that people wear in polite society.

Nice concept - but without either proof-reading or reading your story out-loud it comes across as either a 16 year old for whom English is not their first langauge, or a 14 year old.

Also you need a header of some kind on the top of your story with some sort of disclaimer.
Don't give up, though.
Comments from author:
i have had the story betaed and also i combined the first and second chapter into one please read in and tell me what you think

Weasleysangel
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Dec 04] • Not Rated
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