This is amazing and funny. I especially loved The Reason We Can't Send Anya, Lecter's hope that Starling be a better class act and Andrew's questionnaire. You did a very good job of nailing the Scooby speak. Hilarious!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
The head shrinking and write-up of their inner thoughts is really well-written :)
Not real happy 'bout ya dissing Republican elected officials though ;)
Everybody's really spot on, including the atmosphere, except... when Andrew's caught babbling and after he's finished 'turning his gaze downward shamefully' I'd have him give in and say his full name. Otherwise he comes across as more of a ponce than he actually is :D
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Read your story a while ago, and loved it. Really, it was fantastic watching the responses of Andrew (who fancied himself evil) and Spike (who actually was evil) to Hannibal the Cannibal. Truly noteworthy.
That said, if you wouldn't mind playing with the crazy psychologist once again, I've recently posted a challenge for a Hannibal Lecter fic - called In-Xan-ity. Mind giving it a shot?
Review By [ElvenBookwyrm] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Not Rated
AHH! *rotflmao* Okay, that gave me an immense joy to read. You wrote the characters (esp. Lecter) very well. Only one complaint. We all know what a cockney accent sounds like. One of the general rules I learnded in creative writing is that once the accent has been established, you don't really need to bother with writing out the dialect. Often, if you write out the dialect, it becomes taxing to read.
But thats the only thing that i found problematic. Otherwise, I'd call this story perfect, a real joy to read.
Review By [vinniebatman] • Date [30 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Loved it, though have to admit would have liked Spike to do one of his analyis (seeing as he did it often to Buffy), inhuman killer against human killer both with a taste of human flesh. To get Hannibal Lecter (sp?) riled up. Still it was a very good story and I enjoyed it alot.
Interesting start you've got here, you have everyone on character which is good and I enjoyed the fact that Andrew is going to do the interview. I also like the fact that this story is different, it much more interesting that way. I hope to read the next chapter soon. Seak