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Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from mendenbar
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I have just found this fic and find it quite delightful and unique. Sorry that RL seems to have taken it away from you. One chapter (I think it is 18) is out of place in the time line. It appears to need to come much earlier as it goes back to Angel first coming back to Hogwarts with the Scoobies. Should you ever decide to return to this, I would be most pleased to read it.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Angelfirenze
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Why do you keep mentioning how much Buffy and Angel love one another? I'm a shipper and it's even getting to be too sickeningly saccharine for me. *getting rather tired of it* At this point, we know. You don't have to have everyone who meets them come to this conclusion over and over and over again. It's repetitive and gets in the way of the story.

The same goes for all the exposition cakes dropped everywhere. If we've been reading and watching, you don't have to describe every little thing. Larger things are important but they don't have to be mentioned again and again and again. It dilutes said importance.

That said, I'm rather enjoying this mind-bending story. It's definitely breaking my already very open box even further apart.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Angelfirenze
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"Scott, I've really enjoyed going out with you and everything. You've been really nice to me and under most circumstances I would really like to be with you. But, things were really complicated for me when we got together and they just got more complicated. I want you to be happy and to have a normal life. I know that if you stay with me you'll never be able to have that. It's really complicated, but there are these people who want to kill me, I don't want you getting hurt. And there's this guy. He's one of the people whose supposed to be killing me, but he's a friend and he's more than that. He kinda fell in with the old crowd and we broke up, badly. But he's back now. I love him. I may never be able to have anything resembling normal with him, but I could never be with you knowing that I wouldn't be able to care about you like you deserved. You need someone who won't have to always have to stop themselves from thinking about someone else. I hope I haven't hurt you too much. I thought it was better that I tell you now instead of just going off to England and leaving you to wonder."

Okay, WOW -- Buffy needs very much to BREATHE here.

Not to mention, you've completely retconned everyone's past, not just Angel and Harry's. Those parts are getting a bit difficult to follow since I know perfectly well what really happened and when, why -- all that. Giles being a Squib and meeting Ethan at the age of fifteen? Wow, so blatantly different from canon I'm almost distracted by it.

Oh, right, and Faith not having a good childhood is one of the biggest, best understatements I've ever read regarding her.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Angelfirenze
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A vortex opening up to 1753, hm? Okay, I'll go with it. *nods* And Buffy's still not the older one in the relationship, if you go by canon. Harry was born in 1980 and Buffy was born in 1981. She's still younger. The only reason he's younger at the moment was because of his being fourteen when this vortex opened.

I'm fairly certain my head will have exploded by the time this is over, but I'll weather the storm. *nods*
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [26 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Angelfirenze
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I'm very curious about just how in the hell you plan to pull this off, but it certainly explains why Angel made that comment about Gryffindor. *rolls eyes in Harry's general direction* I've grown to love Slytherin House and think they got the massively short end of the stick in canon, which JKR freely admits.

*pointedly doesn't seethe*
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [26 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Angelfirenze
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This is very interesting, but the huge gaps in between sections and the misspelling of McGonagall's name are unduly distracting, as is the -- well, I have to be honest -- inaccuracies about how the Ministry of Magic would transfer over to the American political system. We would have a Secretary of Magic, not a Minister, and the Ministry would actually be a Department.

Other than any of that, I can't wait to see where this is heading. *surges forward now that I've gotten that unpleasantness out of the way*
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [26 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from LalaithQuetzalli
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I didn't really like Wesley, at least not until the spinoff Angel, when he turned into a fairl decent fellow, learning to fight on his own and provide help when truly needed.
I think this fic is interesting, if bizzarre as well. Still, I can't wait to read more of it, see what you have planned. It's all most interesting.
Please update soon!
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from blackroze
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love it plz plz plz continue
Review By [blackroze] • Date [9 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from (Past Donor)kaliGofD
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i really enjoyed this fic so far and i do hope that u pic it up again in the future as id love to know what happens!!!!

UPDATE SOON!!
Review By [(Past Donor)kaliGofD] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Silver
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I reaaly like this fic...especially the twist of Harry being Angel and finally letting Angel/harry and Buffy be together. What wonderful idea! Alos would like to have a lemon from when they do get together. my email is Tuborgwol@msn.com. only problem is.......Why in all the worlds has this great fic not been updated in over a year?! I know life gets in the way, but I would appreciate knowing if this is going to be on hold or something. please update soonest!
Review By [Silver] • Date [7 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from AngellovesBuffy
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Okay I love this fic so why hasn't it been updated in over a year? Please fix the whole chaper 8 thing it gets kinda confusing if one dosen't read the A/N at the begining of the chapters. Again PLEASE PLEASE update this fic!
Review By [AngellovesBuffy] • Date [7 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from (Current Donor)drdeth
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Great story, please more don't leave us hanging in the air wondering what is going to happen next
Review By [(Current Donor)drdeth] • Date [16 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Lin
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I really like the idea, i actually think this is the first story i have come across where Angel and HP are the same person which i saying something considering i'm addicted to HP/BTVS crossover fic. The plot is good but many parts get to be redundant, seems like filler and could be cut out with a simple "the scooby gang filled Malfoy in on everything" instead of acutally restating everything that happend. Err, not trying to be too critical because i really did enjoy reading this.
Maybe a bit more on how Hermionie and Ron are taking the fact that their best friend was 15 a few months ago and now he is a diffrent person entirely? I understand that jumping from character to character can sometimes be confusing or get dull...i dunno.
Hopefully it will be flattering to know that i created an account for the sole purpose of reviewing this. :P
I'm a sucker for spike and well you didn't kill him off so i kinda hope you'll bring him back into the story. :D
Anyway keep writeing.
Review By [Lin] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from rutterla
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I read this story on ff.net and I really liked it. I hope you eventually continue this story. "Hugs" you since its Hug the writers month
Review By [rutterla] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Gylzgurl
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I love your fic and can't wait for your next update.
Review By [Gylzgurl] • Date [9 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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