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Review of chapter "part 2" from zafaran
Review:
You've set up such a nice beginning for this story. Any chance of you poking your muse and getting more of this story to show up? You write well, and several of your stories that I've read today are ones that I've read previously, and several are works in progress that I've been hoping would be finished for several years now. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from (Past Donor)JamieT
Review:
Fun!
Review By [(Past Donor)JamieT] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from spring
Review:
Oh come on! This is Wonderful so far why oh why haven't you finished this? I think that it would be really really cool when Gaia and Xander get there hands on Wood. Please please please please finish this wonderful fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from rocky
Review:
just to let you know the "," when you hit shift then the "." when you hit shift will often times not let you show whats inside them on the posts. I see a few places where Xander was, i think talking to the voice and the voice said something and it was missing. I looking on you fanfic sight and it's not there. Oh yea i liked what i read it was good, leading in a direction of bad Scoobies good dawn and Xander, i think.
Comments from author:
This was a very old story of mine, that when TTH changed format was complete, when the change over happened it lost a lot of pieces along with a few other stories at the time.

its were I copied the one on FF Net, so it had the same problems. and I never got around to fixing them. it would be a waste of time the story is dead, and if anyone wants to finish it they can have it. I lost all the notes I had for it. had a hard drive crash the Katrina got the rest. I left up in hopes someone would want to take it and complete it.
Review By [rocky] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from mrsinister
Review:
Interesting...
Comments from author:
thanks but this is probably never go any further.
Review By [mrsinister] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from Vorax
Review:
It looks good. There is just one problem, it seems that several things that are being said or thought are missing.
Comments from author:
Yes a lot of my older stuff here has that problem, When the Twisting Updated, anything between() disappeared and haven't had time to rework some of the parts
Review By [Vorax] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from rocky
Review:
So far I would say this is the best of the best on Xander getting snaked. I am curious as to if the story is going to continue. I would like to see what Mother Earth's story is. I recommend this fic as an awesome start and gives me ideas for my own incomplete stories.
Comments from author:
thanks. I would like to complete it but lost all my notes on it. I am trying to go back over all my stories til they are all complete. so with hope I will work on this soon.
Review By [rocky] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from GoddessNyx
Review:
This is damn cool and I'm pissed it hasn't been updated lately. Please update!!!
Comments from author:
Sorry this is a dead one at least for right now. Katrina got all my notes on it. and with all the wip i have I have and RL problems I can only work on one at a time.
Review By [GoddessNyx] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from zafaran
Review:
Oh, now *this* is an interesting twist. If I read this correctly, Xander is possessed of a *good*? Goa'uld? He's got the Slayer/Watcher pairs, though what he's doing with them is up for grabs so far in the story. Looks like he's rescued them from Wood so that the rest of them aren't killed, which is good, but there's not enough going on in the story so far to give a definitive impression on whether Xander is leading them still as Slayers or he's subverted them into something else. Is there any possibility of getting more chapters on this story anytime soon? I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Comments from author:
No promises on this one, I lost all my notes on this during Katrina, so its up in the air.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [4 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from feuerfliege
Review:
I really like it. hope you'll change your mind about continuing it. it has a lot of potential.
Comments from author:
I did too, but its unlikely for me to work on it at this time, its up for grabs if anyone wants to take over, I have lost all the notes on it thou. so who ever takes it has a fresh start with it.
Review By [feuerfliege] • Date [7 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from Bobboky
Review:
cool, exctied for more
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from aussiemel
Review:
Love it. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [6 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from Elleria
Review:
You're missing a bit at the end here....And when are you going to update this? It's been over a year now.... More Soon please?
Comments from author:
I really dont think this story will cont. I lost all my notes on it. I cannt even find my copy of it on my hard drive.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [2 May 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Xander thought, talking to the Voice in his
head.



came the reply.

Huh? What reply?
Comments from author:
to be honest I cant recall, a while back Twisting reformanted the stories and anything that was between () was removed. and I lost track of my notes on this story, its dead anyway. I it a major road block while writing it.

Its up for grabs for anyone that wants it. just let me know were your posting it.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [29 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from Pearlmegan
Review:
I love it, please add more soon!!!

Pearlmegan :)
Review By [Pearlmegan] • Date [27 Apr 06] • Not Rated
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