Interesting idea, but something is missing in the story. I'm sorry I'm not able to pinpoint exactly what it is because it is a feeling as opposed actually knowing. I am intrigued enough by the idea that I am going to read the sequel.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
It is embarassing to cry at work. Yet here I am, sniffling away, glad the door is closed. What a lovely relationship you've painted between Anita and Nathaniel, and this was so very in character for Joyce. She was all loving, and it makes great sense for her to reach out like that. Really makes you wonder what if? Doesn't it?
Nice ... very bittersweet, poor nathaniel... are you going to do a follow up perhaps Nathaniel wanting to take care of Joyce's kids so they dont end up on the streets not realising she's the slayer... this story has loads of potential
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. I'm not sure if this storyverse will continue. Sometimes they do, but in other cases they don't. We'll see if the inspiration strikes. Thanks for the review.
Review By [yakuit] • Date [9 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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