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The Warrior

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Review of chapter "The Warrior" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* LOVELY! Perfect reactions!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Warrior" from serenityselena
Review:
awesome story ....
with amusing moments too ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Warrior" from zili
Review:
whoa that was really really sappy and pretty OOC I think
Comments from author:
To bad you didn't like it. But different views and all that stuff right? Everyone can't like everything. I appreciate that you took the time to add a comment.
Review By [zili] • Date [10 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Warrior" from Duchess
Review:
This was cute and yes, Cassie will definitely have to come up with a way that she can date, but not get in trouble for being disobedient at the same time. Tough job and I wish her luck! *vbg*

I think that SG1 would react, if not exactly the way you've written it here, this is close enough. They would keep her on a strict schedule and NOT let her end up power mad like Buffy turned out in canon, that's for sure. Good job!

I rated you a 7 because of your hurried writing style, it's almost like you got bit by this plot bunny and just wanted it typed up and gotten rid of quickly. Is that the case? I also recommend a beta to catch those pesky spelling and grammar errors, it helps heaps with how your story is percieved by the reader. :)
Comments from author:
Wow. You wrote me a really shiny and long review. Thanks.

And thank you for the advice about the beta and you're right...I got the plot in my head and wanted it out as fast as I could. I really have to work on that....being more patient and stuff.

Thanks again for taking the time to review.
Review By [Duchess] • Date [7 Apr 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Warrior" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! This was a comedic story, but you only strayed a few centemeters from stark reality. Well, SG reality. I thought you did an excellent with all the characters and I would love to read more about this crossover universe. I pitty the poor fool who would ever try to date Cassie, even in the 'real' SGverse. Lol!
Comments from author:
The guy wouldn't live through the night. *chuckle* Thanks for the comment.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Warrior" from matthew
Review:
cute. That said, the dialogue is both rushed and quite a bit OOC for the characters. You might want to work on that.
Comments from author:
I will have to do that. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [matthew] • Date [9 Jan 05] • Not Rated
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